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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks we should not allow aliens to grow and use our products but allow indigenous people to grow and use their own product to avoid artificial demand; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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This speaks we should not allow aliens to grow and use our products but allow indigenous people to grow and use their own product to avoid artificial demand; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Exactly, Al This current craze over Marijuana is global.
Thanks for reviewing,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a cute poem about animals and weed. I can imagine the cows might just get into the mary jane fields and get a little high.
also loved the play of aliens, that may be the outer space kind or others.
Excellent contribution to the Animal Crackers Club. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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This is a cute poem about animals and weed. I can imagine the cows might just get into the mary jane fields and get a little high.
also loved the play of aliens, that may be the outer space kind or others.
Excellent contribution to the Animal Crackers Club. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanks Gloria, I feel honored the #1 reviews my posts. I was lucky to find that picture,it was perfect for the challenge given
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from tfawcus
Some excruciating punning here, which lies at the heart of the humour. Love it! I'm having difficulty in coming to terms with it as a poem though! It seems like free verse that has done a runner and escaped into prose. LOL
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Some excruciating punning here, which lies at the heart of the humour. Love it! I'm having difficulty in coming to terms with it as a poem though! It seems like free verse that has done a runner and escaped into prose. LOL
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Who knows! Maybe I was a ?happy camper? nearby, when the result of the challenge looked piece-mealed LOL High,Tony!
Thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from ioana.u
Holy, the cow and Nip the cat in a marijuana field. Well, of course, where else? :))
That was a really funny and inspired piece, thank you so much for brightening my evening! I can't believe you found a picture for it!
Ioana
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Holy, the cow and Nip the cat in a marijuana field. Well, of course, where else? :))
That was a really funny and inspired piece, thank you so much for brightening my evening! I can't believe you found a picture for it!
Ioana
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Anytime someone tells me my poetry is funny, I am happy. Thank YOU! Yes, it was serendipitous., that picture was perfect
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! You have a point there. Maybe that's what keeps the "holy" cow happy in the field and "Nip" the cat enjoying his catnip. A cute and unique little story that I enjoyed reading. I enjoyed the puns, too, which are, well, very punny. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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LOL! You have a point there. Maybe that's what keeps the "holy" cow happy in the field and "Nip" the cat enjoying his catnip. A cute and unique little story that I enjoyed reading. I enjoyed the puns, too, which are, well, very punny. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Your positive review was very welcome. I?m glad you enjoyed the puns
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Badger_29
Simply hilarious Tricia. You managed to grab the theme of this and convicted quite nicely without in the author's notes. The picture are you held my interest right from the very start wondering what was going to happen next and then I was rolling on the floor laughing my ass off quite clever!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Simply hilarious Tricia. You managed to grab the theme of this and convicted quite nicely without in the author's notes. The picture are you held my interest right from the very start wondering what was going to happen next and then I was rolling on the floor laughing my ass off quite clever!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Your review was a great addition to my day Thank
you very much, I?m glad it gave you a laugh
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun happy animal write filled with expectation and at least the chucked on their way home! I thoroughly enjoyed your story, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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A fun happy animal write filled with expectation and at least the chucked on their way home! I thoroughly enjoyed your story, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanks Dolly, your support of my posts is very gratefully received.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Janice Canerdy
How could I read about a cow named Holy Cow and aliens sucking up
pot and not laugh? This reminds me of the time a joint fell out of my
friend's purse, and I said that sure was a funny-looking cigarette!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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How could I read about a cow named Holy Cow and aliens sucking up
pot and not laugh? This reminds me of the time a joint fell out of my
friend's purse, and I said that sure was a funny-looking cigarette!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Ah, innocence has all but disappeared. The world is going ?loco?. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about the visit and the cow that eat weed that was actually mariujana and got a little high that made her look drunk and she seems to hallusinate when she sees the light shining down from the sky.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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A very well-written story about the visit and the cow that eat weed that was actually mariujana and got a little high that made her look drunk and she seems to hallusinate when she sees the light shining down from the sky.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is clever. It's a humorous idea to think about aliens coming down to fields to get weed. That's very funny. It's even funnier the way that you carried your idea out with the cows.
Poor cow. I would not know what a marijuana leaf looked like either.
My only suggestion has to do with your line "it's got strange leaves." When I was reading this, I wasn't thinking about marijuana or even looking at the drawing that closely. "It's got strange leaves" made me look at the saucer itself, and I didn't see any leaves. Silly I know. I like people to tell me what they are thinking as they read though, so I am passing this thought along. Why not say "it's beaming up strange leaves?'
As I said, silly I know. Seems like I grow nit pickier with every passing day.
It's a very good entry. I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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This is clever. It's a humorous idea to think about aliens coming down to fields to get weed. That's very funny. It's even funnier the way that you carried your idea out with the cows.
Poor cow. I would not know what a marijuana leaf looked like either.
My only suggestion has to do with your line "it's got strange leaves." When I was reading this, I wasn't thinking about marijuana or even looking at the drawing that closely. "It's got strange leaves" made me look at the saucer itself, and I didn't see any leaves. Silly I know. I like people to tell me what they are thinking as they read though, so I am passing this thought along. Why not say "it's beaming up strange leaves?'
As I said, silly I know. Seems like I grow nit pickier with every passing day.
It's a very good entry. I wish you luck.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Hi Debbie! There?s always one who does not ?get it? LOL. Your suggestion was a good one. The line has officially been changed. Thanks for positive review.
Hugs, Trisha
