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Thoughts Can Deceive

how inconsistent thought deceives

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Comment from Kathleen Washnis
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I like how you were conveying the complexities of friendship vs love. This can often be a tangled web especially when you think one thing and the other person has an entirely different mindset on the relationship. I like the words you used to describe the feelings of the heart.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Kathleen you can see how long it is between poems. Thank you for your review. giovanni
reply by Kathleen Washnis on 16-Mar-2019
    I hadn't seen your name in a while but I understand how life can be. Good to have you back!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you Kathleen. giovanni
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks though friendship is apparently considered dearest love but sometime thoughts may deceive for misunderstanding and assumptions; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
    Thank you for your review. giovanni
Comment from l.d.lauritzen
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Don't know that I believe friendship is the dearest love. The two can be close but when love truly strikes I've found it often comes out second best. I feel this everytime I see my best friend holding my ex-fiances hand.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    l.d.lauritzen thank you for your review. giovanni
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    l.d.lauritzen thank you for your review. giovanni
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    Thank you for your review. giovanni