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A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities

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A collection of poems showcasing unusual words

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Comment from --Turtle.
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A fun lymerick flow to this poem, with a theme I can relate to, from either angle... facing a crowd and letting them down, and facing an entertainer only to be disappointed... though I would never jeer a performer, I like to think I'm too empathetic for that.

The more I read this poem, the more I liked it. The word of the day is meaty... the setup is one of anticipation, and the behavior of crowd and performer is simple but complex. Both greet each other with open arms, and then ... on failure... both blame the other. The performer blames the crowd for not understanding him, and the crowd blames the performer for not knowing what might please them.


 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    You got the intended mood perfectly, Turtle. Many thanks for the insightful comments, much appreciated. Craig
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I bet his voice was too sibilant. That's what brought on the exsibilation. Your act can't be good if your articulation is not on point.
I think that I have mastered exsibilation. My computer does not like me using it though.
Thanks for the fun, Craig.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Haha, Debbie. It was a most exsibilating experience. Cheers, Craig
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Great pairing of picture and Limerick poem here, Craig! Audiences often clap because they think it's just the polite thing to do, but alas, sometimes the audience can't help but show their 'exsibilation' for an act that really sucks. At least he left before they brought out the hook. :) "I'm so misunderstood" made me laugh.

Excellent job on this limerick, Craig. Your poem clearly conveys the meaning of the word 'exsibilation'. I enjoyed your poem, and I thank you for teaching this reader another new word!

Cheers,
Connie

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thanks so much, Connie. I really appreciate the great comments. Craig
Comment from rama devi
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Excellent use of this unusual word. It sounds like what it describes! Great limerick form and style. Great rhymes. Fun write. No nits. Fine presentation too with funny satirical politics hinted at by the 'face' ha ha ha.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thanks so much, RD. You're the only person who has mentioned it, surprisingly :) Cheers, Craig
reply by rama devi on 30-Nov-2018
    :-)))
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Well done limerick and I could guess the meaning of the word because I know what a "sibilant" is. But it's very unusual to see an 'x' followed by an 's' which makes the word look oddly misspelled.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Helen. I was exsited to see it. Almost nothing could exstinguish my joy. I'm just being silly now, way too exsuberant :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Well, I guess that's what happens to the best of them,including poets, yes? (LOL) (I'm talking about me, not you, of course.) Okay, now I'm fresh outta words. So how do I fill this box? Oh yeah, fun limerick, well done. :))))))))

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thanks once again, most grateful :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Good job, Craig, with your limerick for your word. Your rhymes are super. The image is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Your context gives readers all that is needed to understand the word. I wonder how many times this has happened in reality. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thanks so much, Jan. Most thankful for the kind words -- Craig
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A lovely limerick about yet another actor that cannot seem to get past the fact that it is not all about him!! :) ;) Thank you for sharing your fun word of the day in this form, sir! :) ;) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Yvette. I appreciate the great comments :) Craig
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Limerick about the actor that seems not to be as good at his job as he liked to be. The audience give an honest opinion and it doesn't sound that they were happy with his performance either.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    Some were, for a while, but they soon got over it :) Many thanks, Sandra.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello Craig, Your word exsibilation is quite a tongue twister.... I prefer the word jeering... so much simpler. Thanks again for sharing your tome of literary curiosities with us.

All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Melissa. I don't think it matters which word we use, as long as, in these festive times, we remain of good jeer ;-)
reply by Sugarray77 on 27-Nov-2018
    You nut!!