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Comment from Earl Corp
So you were channeling your inner Isaac Newton when you sat down to write this. You know I like rhyming poems, poems that make sense, and poems the entertain me. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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So you were channeling your inner Isaac Newton when you sat down to write this. You know I like rhyming poems, poems that make sense, and poems the entertain me. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from nomi338
The cray cute poem just served to remind me that you are still the loon that I have come to know and admire. Please do not ever change. I do not think that I could handle a completely serious Bill Schott. Best advice I can ever give is, stay crazy, it helps, it really does.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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The cray cute poem just served to remind me that you are still the loon that I have come to know and admire. Please do not ever change. I do not think that I could handle a completely serious Bill Schott. Best advice I can ever give is, stay crazy, it helps, it really does.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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I?m in pear- odise and grape-ful.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, I'm still smiling. You are just so good with these poems where you play with words to make them fit and rhyme. Yes, indeed, take care with apple tree. Good job it was not a coconut. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Hi Bill, I'm still smiling. You are just so good with these poems where you play with words to make them fit and rhyme. Yes, indeed, take care with apple tree. Good job it was not a coconut. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Ulla
Comment from judiverse
Cleverly done. The apple-o-gized word is cute. Great work with your rhyme. That is an occupational hazard of poets--being hit on the head with an apple. "Apple tapped" is great sound. "Curly crown" wishful thinking or alliteration? No wonder so many poets write blank verse if they keep getting hit on the head. "Don't stand under the apple tree while you're writing poetry." judi
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Cleverly done. The apple-o-gized word is cute. Great work with your rhyme. That is an occupational hazard of poets--being hit on the head with an apple. "Apple tapped" is great sound. "Curly crown" wishful thinking or alliteration? No wonder so many poets write blank verse if they keep getting hit on the head. "Don't stand under the apple tree while you're writing poetry." judi
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Thanks for revie2ing, Judi.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from damommy
What a hoot! poet-tree and apple-o-gized. How clever you are! I think that apple probably did more than tap your curly crown. I always get such a laugh from your poems. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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What a hoot! poet-tree and apple-o-gized. How clever you are! I think that apple probably did more than tap your curly crown. I always get such a laugh from your poems. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Thanks, da
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! Loved this one, so very clever and funny! I love how you have twisted words to fit the rhyme. Poet-tree, (love it) Apple-o-gised! So funny!! Well done, Bill, another excellent piece of writing. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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LOL! Loved this one, so very clever and funny! I love how you have twisted words to fit the rhyme. Poet-tree, (love it) Apple-o-gised! So funny!! Well done, Bill, another excellent piece of writing. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and your poems always make me smile, when I say apple to my grand children they immediately point to their ipads! He he he, how the world has changed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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This is a fun write and your poems always make me smile, when I say apple to my grand children they immediately point to their ipads! He he he, how the world has changed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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That IS funny. (Until they want a bushel of them)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun little write here, Bill -- not part of a collection? :) ;) It's not quite a 'chain-type' but I like the way you pick up the last line of the first and re-phrase it to fit the second. Gives it an unexpected lift in the middle! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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A fun little write here, Bill -- not part of a collection? :) ;) It's not quite a 'chain-type' but I like the way you pick up the last line of the first and re-phrase it to fit the second. Gives it an unexpected lift in the middle! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Just a quick poem for a Tuesday morning.
Comment from Sally Law
A poet, too, I see! This is outstanding and it's nice to see the other side of your writings. I apologize no sixer here, but I would give it. I am just getting into poetry here on FanStory. I never thought I would. I have been strictly a short works writer, but poetry is a lot of fun and not nearly as stressful.
All my best,
Sal
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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A poet, too, I see! This is outstanding and it's nice to see the other side of your writings. I apologize no sixer here, but I would give it. I am just getting into poetry here on FanStory. I never thought I would. I have been strictly a short works writer, but poetry is a lot of fun and not nearly as stressful.
All my best,
Sal
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Just a gag to be funny. Thanks for giving this a look, Sally.
Comment from Dean Kuch
"Apple-o-gized", he says, heh-heh.
Good use of double entendre here, Bill.
I wonder if William Tell experienced a similar experience.
Or, one of the most famous anecdotes in the history of science concerns a young Isaac Newton. As he is sitting in his garden, an apple falls on his head and, in a stroke of brilliant insight, he suddenly comes up with his theory of gravity.
And, as they say, the rest is history.
~Dean
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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"Apple-o-gized", he says, heh-heh.
Good use of double entendre here, Bill.
I wonder if William Tell experienced a similar experience.
Or, one of the most famous anecdotes in the history of science concerns a young Isaac Newton. As he is sitting in his garden, an apple falls on his head and, in a stroke of brilliant insight, he suddenly comes up with his theory of gravity.
And, as they say, the rest is history.
~Dean
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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I asked an apple about gravity once; he didn?t know. I guess he was an apple dumb-ling.
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It's my belief that it was all just coreographed, Bill.
Good stuff,
~Dean
