Messy Business.
War is messy3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Very well illustrated. Love the black-colored backdrop you chose to bring out the blood-red lettering of your poem. Shall I save the best for last? Your words made this reader see, smell, taste, hear and fear the remains of the battle. I, too, hope we never have to experience this. Very well done. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Very well illustrated. Love the black-colored backdrop you chose to bring out the blood-red lettering of your poem. Shall I save the best for last? Your words made this reader see, smell, taste, hear and fear the remains of the battle. I, too, hope we never have to experience this. Very well done. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Ciao Burnett , nice to meet you!
Thank you very much for such a postive response ..
I'm addicted to black , I just love how it makes pics and writing stand out .
Glad to know that I was able to make you feel the ugly consequences of war ..
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a poem dealing with the kind of messes we don't generally have to consider much, thank goodness. Sounds like this mess is well worthy of a poem - yuuuccck!
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a poem dealing with the kind of messes we don't generally have to consider much, thank goodness. Sounds like this mess is well worthy of a poem - yuuuccck!
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Yes we can consider ourselves fortunate .. Christmas is around the corner , gifts and hearty meals are on their way .
On the other side of the globe a child every 10 minutes is dying of hunger ..others are dying due to some war adults are fighting..we have made a mess of this world .
Thanks for the 5 stars !
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the messy business on earth is ever since the dawn of civilization is war and war is ever messy to mankind; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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This speaks the messy business on earth is ever since the dawn of civilization is war and war is ever messy to mankind; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Sadly the dark side of mankind prevails always.
Those that have the power to make a different don't care about those that die in war ..and sadly that does included just soldiers but also civilians ,men, women and children.
