Comment from damommy

Excellent

You have some very good lines in this free verse. I like the restrictive jacket line especially. A perfect choice of picture to go along with this, showing all the stages of a butterfly's life.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018

Thanks for a kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, this is a lovely write, Trisha -- have always been fascinated by the 'metamorphosis' processes (moths, butterflies, mosquitoes, cicadas, etc) and your poem is a wonderful highlight to it!! :) :) Thank you so very much for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018

Thanks, I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. Your review is so positive, and complimentary. These style challenges are certainly good brain material.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I loved that line: The tight restrictive jacket of its past', ten marvellous syllables there Trisha! There is nothing more amazing than nature to create miracles, a wonderful tributory poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018

Thanks as always. Some of my ideas are good, some flaky
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 23-Nov-2018

That?s the nature of a poet, we are all the same, even the famous ones! He he he, love Dolly x

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Thank you so much for your extensive notes on this poem. I have been writing poetry for just a few months, and educational notes are so helpful.
I enjoyed the rhyming pattern that you chose. You use good, strong rhymes like "talking," "stalking," "cast," and "past."
You tell the butterfly's story well, creating colorful images. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018

Great! I?ve been reviving my college penning for two years now. I love to challenge myself, and improve my range while meeting good friends like you. Thanks so much,Debbie,
Hugs,Trisha