Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Miss Winter"
15 total reviews
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This write is captivating in the way I remember Hans Anderson's fairy tales captivated me. The latter were of course much lengthier. In your poem I like the action verbs, the images and how your words stir the imagination.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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This write is captivating in the way I remember Hans Anderson's fairy tales captivated me. The latter were of course much lengthier. In your poem I like the action verbs, the images and how your words stir the imagination.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Hi, Donka, thanks for your lovely expressive review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from robyn corum
Hello, friend!
Haven't seen you in a while. Hope you are well and writing lots and lots. *smile*
I really enjoyed your tanka, and so far, it's been the best entry I've seen for this contest. It is sharp and intuitive and presents a clear picture of this moment in time. I enjoyed! Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Hello, friend!
Haven't seen you in a while. Hope you are well and writing lots and lots. *smile*
I really enjoyed your tanka, and so far, it's been the best entry I've seen for this contest. It is sharp and intuitive and presents a clear picture of this moment in time. I enjoyed! Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Well helloooo Robyn! Thanks for your complimentary review, and luck wishes. I usually place at the bottom of votes when all is said and done. My prize comes in the form of great reviews. Then I know my penning has given enjoyment.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sanku
This is a beautiful word picture of winter.The enjoyment of reading this was enhanced with the personification of winter .what a lovely description.And the art work best suited for the words.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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This is a beautiful word picture of winter.The enjoyment of reading this was enhanced with the personification of winter .what a lovely description.And the art work best suited for the words.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. It was a joy to write. My goal is always reader gratification from reviews. Your review is appreciated
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Right, I find the projection of the feeling and her wishes go nice, let her feel and enjoy, Miss Winter in privacy; this is a sort of role playing spirit; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Right, I find the projection of the feeling and her wishes go nice, let her feel and enjoy, Miss Winter in privacy; this is a sort of role playing spirit; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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A complimentary review, thank you
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from zanya
A metaphorical portrayal of Winter as She tightens Her grip, spreading 'White shroud of beauty' beautiful image for the dormant season and a lovely pic
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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A metaphorical portrayal of Winter as She tightens Her grip, spreading 'White shroud of beauty' beautiful image for the dormant season and a lovely pic
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thanks for your positive review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a beautifully crafted Tanka you have developed for the Tanka Poetry Prompt contest. Your choice of artwork is superb and sparks the imagination about Wintertime. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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This is a beautifully crafted Tanka you have developed for the Tanka Poetry Prompt contest. Your choice of artwork is superb and sparks the imagination about Wintertime. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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You are very complimentary, thank you. Im.pleased you enjoyed my poetry
Hugs,TrIsha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful write with your graceful personification of winter and her lovely and seemingly royal actions of bringing her splendor to the land! ;) Great job!! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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A beautiful write with your graceful personification of winter and her lovely and seemingly royal actions of bringing her splendor to the land! ;) Great job!! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Your review was delightful! I find the most beautiful pictures and thoughts get triggered easier. Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
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Your review was delightful! I find the most beautiful pictures and thoughts get triggered easier. Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think the last line should read: "sets the stage for enjoyment", it's just a suggestion Trisha, I loved the sentiments and the joy in winter here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I think the last line should read: "sets the stage for enjoyment", it's just a suggestion Trisha, I loved the sentiments and the joy in winter here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Even if I don?t use your suggestion it?s still appreciated! Thanks very much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Beautiful artwork and a lovely Tanka that describes the cold winds but also the snow white beauty.Great cental line - surveys her domain -
lovely presentation trisha
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Beautiful artwork and a lovely Tanka that describes the cold winds but also the snow white beauty.Great cental line - surveys her domain -
lovely presentation trisha
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Wow! My leaf poem worked! Double leaves from you LOL, seriously, thank you.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Lady Jane
As the stage - On her stage (just a thought)
This is a lovely tanka. The satori works well here. The first two lines definitely show her in one season, then the final season she imparts her glorious white wealth. Excellent verbiage and that image is to die for and elevated this tanka nicely. I wish you all the best of luck in the contest, dear. Nothing not to like. Keep writing. It suits you :)
Janelle
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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As the stage - On her stage (just a thought)
This is a lovely tanka. The satori works well here. The first two lines definitely show her in one season, then the final season she imparts her glorious white wealth. Excellent verbiage and that image is to die for and elevated this tanka nicely. I wish you all the best of luck in the contest, dear. Nothing not to like. Keep writing. It suits you :)
Janelle
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Janelle, I?m always grateful for your reviews, even though I may not agree with suggestions! Thanks for this complimentary one
Hugs, Trisha
