The Last Song, For God
a beautiful myth, a wild bird's sacrifice to God15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is beautiful dawn, we hear bird song and all our troubles seem to be released in that moment, nature can sooth because it is God's creation, love Dolly x
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This is beautiful dawn, we hear bird song and all our troubles seem to be released in that moment, nature can sooth because it is God's creation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh..wow. I have never heard that take before 'cuz I'm pretty sure that's something I'd have remembered! I do remember Streisand 's song from the sad, thought -provoking movie.....but, to your write here: How beautiful that you taken the take and compared it's melodic release to that of the pained Christian....the bird beautiful song finds its end in death while the Christian 's beautiful song finds its end in the everlasting comfort and life of their Savior! ;) Thank you for sharing, Beautiful Lady!! ;) :) Yvette
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Oh..wow. I have never heard that take before 'cuz I'm pretty sure that's something I'd have remembered! I do remember Streisand 's song from the sad, thought -provoking movie.....but, to your write here: How beautiful that you taken the take and compared it's melodic release to that of the pained Christian....the bird beautiful song finds its end in death while the Christian 's beautiful song finds its end in the everlasting comfort and life of their Savior! ;) Thank you for sharing, Beautiful Lady!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a beautiful verse high you have enhanced with added photos and songs. The photography you chose grabbed me at first and really set the tone for your words. Excellent poetry.
Melissa
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This is a beautiful verse high you have enhanced with added photos and songs. The photography you chose grabbed me at first and really set the tone for your words. Excellent poetry.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
Comment from royowen
I think it was an Australian story, written by an Australian, Colleen McCullough, yes it is tragic, I'm not not sure that's what happens, but it sounds good. Well done Dawn, beautufully written my dear friend, blessings, Roy
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I think it was an Australian story, written by an Australian, Colleen McCullough, yes it is tragic, I'm not not sure that's what happens, but it sounds good. Well done Dawn, beautufully written my dear friend, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the thornbird that seems to only sing once in his lifetime when the thorn of the thorn bush penetrates its chest. It sings the most beautiful song.
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A very well-written poem about the thornbird that seems to only sing once in his lifetime when the thorn of the thorn bush penetrates its chest. It sings the most beautiful song.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
