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Lifelong Journey

A Nonet

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Comment from Joan E.
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I admired reflections about love and your comparisons to "a rose" and "wine" plus your "string of pearls" simile. The artwork you selected reinforces your theme well. Best wishes in the Nonet contest- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

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Comment from Anntonette
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This is a sweet and short formatted poem. Love what you are describing within the image; Roses, pearls and wine, what a great combination of recieved gifts :))
Keep writing!
- Anntonette J

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This nonet, Lifelong Journey, has the proper nine to one format and reinforces the notion that marriages are for keeps and there ought not be any 'take-backsies'.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

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Comment from Jean Hornby
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A beautiful sentimental poem .
Though only short , it goes straight to the point and showers the reader companionship and love and also throws a good reminder to value life and each other .

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

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Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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Oh, my. This is a beautiful nonet poem and perfectly composed. I love the 'tied together like a string of pearls'. You chose the perfect artwork to accompany your most-wonderful creation. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

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Comment from jenintorre
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This is a lovely, romantic nonet poem. I really like yor chosen artwork and presentation. It is a verg good entry. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018

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Comment from DonandVicki
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Usually these structured poems seem forced but yours flows smoothly from line to line throughout the whole poem. The art work enhances the poem. Don and Vicki.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2018

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Comment from rspoet
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This an excellent Nonet poem and entry for the contest
Though many would call it a reverse Nonet
because the contest prompt says "the first line has nine syllables"
Not sure if the committee will accept it reversed.
Otherwise, very nicely done with great picture to match
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2018

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    Thanks for the heads up about it being reversed. Will try to revise it.