Your Choice
a pause...... for a moment14 total reviews
Comment from Thor R
Good photo for the poem and a good thought to think about and consider. Maybe consider replacing shadows with places to add another element to the poem?
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Good photo for the poem and a good thought to think about and consider. Maybe consider replacing shadows with places to add another element to the poem?
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thank you. I had places there originally, but changed it. Great suggestion!
All the best. M
Comment from Jaye Bennett
You have written quite a philosophic 5-7-5 poem. The picture emphasizes this with it cloud/sunshine makeup. Very good. I think it an astute statement. It should do well.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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You have written quite a philosophic 5-7-5 poem. The picture emphasizes this with it cloud/sunshine makeup. Very good. I think it an astute statement. It should do well.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thank you for your comments. All the best!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I love the topic you've chosen for this writing prompt. It has a level of depth and meaning. Your format (5-7-5) is nicely written and formatted. This is a great contest entry. I think it's one of the best. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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I love the topic you've chosen for this writing prompt. It has a level of depth and meaning. Your format (5-7-5) is nicely written and formatted. This is a great contest entry. I think it's one of the best. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Cindy! Glad you like it.
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Your Choice, has the correct formatting and puts th3 decision out there to conduct oneself out loud or choose the safety of the shaded side line. Nice.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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This 5-7-5, Your Choice, has the correct formatting and puts th3 decision out there to conduct oneself out loud or choose the safety of the shaded side line. Nice.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanks Bill... You are the first person to refer to the shadows as being safe..... a lot of others look at it as the choice between good and bad. Unique view, and I am very glad you shared it with me. Have a great day!
Comment from tfawcus
Point of view is all important, isn't it? Keeping positive through dark times is much more likely to see us through them than bewailing our fate. Good luck in this writing prompt.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Point of view is all important, isn't it? Keeping positive through dark times is much more likely to see us through them than bewailing our fate. Good luck in this writing prompt.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from lyenochka
How true! Yes, choosing between very different outcomes, our choices matter. Sometimes, we are forced to choose or accept changes in our lives and we just have to trust that God has it all under control.
Dramatic picture!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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How true! Yes, choosing between very different outcomes, our choices matter. Sometimes, we are forced to choose or accept changes in our lives and we just have to trust that God has it all under control.
Dramatic picture!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
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Thanks fo the great review!!
Comment from LIJ Red
Remember the white block letters in the black rectangle that spelled FLY when you finally saw it? Your excellent five seven five has a good point in the message...
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Remember the white block letters in the black rectangle that spelled FLY when you finally saw it? Your excellent five seven five has a good point in the message...
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Excellent. Contrasting images in the physical and spiritual realm are a matter of choice that tips the scale. The art work is stunning.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Excellent. Contrasting images in the physical and spiritual realm are a matter of choice that tips the scale. The art work is stunning.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Donka. Your review is much appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh wow! :) ;) That is certainly a very powerful 5-7-5 for this contest -- just wonderful!! :) ;) This one should do well -- good luck and thanx for sharing! :) ;)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Oh wow! :) ;) That is certainly a very powerful 5-7-5 for this contest -- just wonderful!! :) ;) This one should do well -- good luck and thanx for sharing! :) ;)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from meeshu
truth is truth, what more can be said. life is all about choices and navigating bad influence is not easy. most people know what the right choice is..
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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truth is truth, what more can be said. life is all about choices and navigating bad influence is not easy. most people know what the right choice is..
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thanks so much, Meeshu.
