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This Time - That Time 3

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Gladys and Veronica Talk"
Third book in the time travel trilogy

37 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Oh, what a tangled web we weave!! But Gladys is a most understanding and adventurous sort, so I can't imagine that this will present a problem for her!! I'll read on and see if I'm right.

The excellent story continuous, Sandra! Every chapter is exceptional! xo

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Thanks again, dear friend! :)) xxx
Comment from wordsfromsue
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That was a heart warming and not unexpected chapter. I think we all could guess her toad of a husband would be the one who did her in.

I'm glad her son turned out so well and that the toad didn't kill him as well.

What a comic touch, having Veronica show up in her nightgown. :-)

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018

    Thank you so much, Sue, for the beautiful shiny stars, and the lovely review. That nightdress does get her into trouble, lol! Big hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Wendy Smith1
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Even though I am coming in on chapter 11, I can tell this is a well thought out story and fleshed out characters. I am intrigued by the possibility of someone having passed on vs. time travel. The injection of humor with the leering male ghost was quite welcome. I definitely would like to read the previous chapters. This is the kind of writing I aspire to achieve.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Hi Wendy, what a lovely review to wake up to! Thank you so very much! The golden array of stars are only second to the lovely compliment you gave me. I thank you for both. I'm delighted you have come in at this stage and enjoyed my story. You've made my day! Big hugs, Sandra x
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This explanation should be really interesting. LOL I can't wait to hear it and see if Gladys will accept it. I wonder if we will ever find out exactly how Gladys died. Maybe poison? Who knows???

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thank you so much, Barbara, for another lovely review. I think I'll be posting the next part tomorrow night. You will learn how Gladys died, but not just yet because, umm ... ahh ... it'll come to me, give me a couple of weeks!! LOL. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Sandra,

Wow - caught in a trap. So, will Veronica tell Gladys the entire story? Poor Mildred left to work in a hospital full of the wounded.

I look forward to hearing Veronica's explanation - way to leave the reader hanging

~MP~

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    I've just finished the next part, just tidying it, and reviewing like mad to get some pumps up! Thank you, Patty, for the lovely review, my friend, I really appreciate it. No clues given! LOL xxxx Sandra xx
Comment from apky
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Hello Sandra,

Every time I read this marvellous story, I'm lost for words to praise you, not to mention the absence of any cricisms or correction to point at. You're are amazing with this, my friend. I can only say: Brilliant!

Keep it up.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thank you so much, Aki, for the wonderful 6 stars and lovely review. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying the story. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from sandragee
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So Charles killed Gladys, but he didn't use his fists to beat her to death. I want to hear Gladys story about how her abusive husband got away with murder. Also Veronica sees ghosts, but she is not dead. I can't wait to see Gladys' reaction to hearing that. These two ladies have a lot of explaining to do.
Great chapter. Never a dull moment.

Just a thought:
Isn't that['s] your friend, Mildred...

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thank you so much, Sandra, for your lovely review. Lots of intrigue to come! I'm so pleased you are enjoying this book, This is probably Veronica's hardest assignment. :)) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from meeshu
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I love the idea and imagination in this story. is this something of a weigh station before they go to another time? or is it a destination? not clear on that, but i'll keep reading this excellent story, Sandra................meeshu

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Hi Meeshu, thank you so much for reading this part in the book. I'm glad you're enjoying it. No, it's not a weigh station, it's all part of Veronica and Mildred's fact finding mission before they discover what their assignment is. Once the background to the problem is known, they will understand what they have to do. That will be revealed soon. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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I loved this chapter. I am quite new to this wonderful site, and, to be honest, this is the first chapter (end of chapter 11) of this book that I have read. I want to go back and start from the beginning. I really enjoy your writing! I do not have to stumble over words, phrases, grammar or punctuation. Just a smooth flow where I was wrapped up into the story.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thank you so very much for this amazing review! I really appreciate your comments. This is the third book in the series, but each are completely separate stories with the main characters being Veronica and Mildred. It's so encouraging to learn how much you enjoyed this part, I hope you continue to follow their journey. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from RGstar
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Excellent write. I can't give as much support as missed much of the others, but you are in total control, and this perhaps deserves stars that I have not got, but the experience is valued, Sandra.
Well done.
Best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Aw, thank you, RG. As you kindly said when I reviewed yours, it's the review that counts, and I really appreciate yours. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx