Comment from rhonnie69

Excellent

HELLO JENINTORRE: This is an extremely witty posting. I like it very much. It says so much...with so few words. This is real good, Jenintorre. Keep up the good work. God bless. Cordially. rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Hey I love your review Rhonnie. Thanks a lot. Jen

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Get a room!" is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's entertaining piece was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Many thanks

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 04-Nov-2018

Jen,

You're welcome.

Blessings,

the Duchess :))))))

Comment from poesyapprentice

Excellent

Lol, cute. Nice play on words at the end of this original entry. Display was pretty and colorful but the tiny font was hard to read. Syllable count is correct and the read was good for a smile : ) Thank you for promoting your entry and good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Many thanks

reply by poesyapprentice on 04-Nov-2018

Welcome

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a fun little poem. Your nature 3-5-3 is well formatted and your little message is a fun one. Love your fun with puns on this one. Good luck in the contest. You have a solid entry.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Many thanks Cindy, glad you like it.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Hahaha a good humorous 5 7 5 on the lady bug not being a lady lol.A great entry on the contest, good luck on the contest, should do well.Have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks. So glad you lik it.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello author
Huge smile for your entry in the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt entry
I like how you used one of my favorite insects the lady bug with you humor telling her find your own bed, not mine
Gert

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Many thanks.

reply by Gert sherwood on 03-Nov-2018

Smile you are welcome
and the best to you in this contest.
Gert

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha, I loved this one. Yeah, get a room indeed. Great little 3-5-3 poem for the contest. I loved the idea. Nature it certainly is. Very well thought out. I wish you well in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks Ulla. So glad you like it.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for adding the action-packed, parallel picture! I certainly did not know what to expect after your top note and enjoyed the playfulness. Best wishes in the 3-5-3 contest- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks, glad you like it.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written nature 3-5-3 poem. Nature doesn't seem to care what we think about their behavior in the open for all to see, we just have top turn away and pretend we did not see.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks a lo Sandra.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh, super job with this short poem. Humorous. Yes, let them get a room. I wish you much luck in the contest with this great entry. Image is priceless. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Many thanks Marilyn, as always.

reply by BeasPeas on 03-Nov-2018

Got my vote.

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks