~ Love Scent ~
3 Line Poem ... 5-7-5 (HM)8 total reviews
Comment from BOO ghost
Looks spectacular with a touch of class.
Some elegant words.
Romantic.
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BOO!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Looks spectacular with a touch of class.
Some elegant words.
Romantic.
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BOO!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Thank you BooG. I appreciate the support. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is lovely. My husband passed in January. Whenever I smell the cologne he wore, it brings up memories of him. Your poem is reflective of how our sense of smell brings back recall. Nicely done. Romantic. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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This is lovely. My husband passed in January. Whenever I smell the cologne he wore, it brings up memories of him. Your poem is reflective of how our sense of smell brings back recall. Nicely done. Romantic. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Thank you Marilyn for your kind review on my short poem. I find it amazing how a smell can take us back in memory or state of mind. Thank you too for the contest wishes. Much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Pantygynt
You have elected to follow the 5-7-5 option here. The final line is of excellent quality, personifying the lingering cologne scent in a most delightful way.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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You have elected to follow the 5-7-5 option here. The final line is of excellent quality, personifying the lingering cologne scent in a most delightful way.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Thank you pantygynt. Glad you enjoyed my 5-7-5 short poem. Your comments are always appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the feeling and sensation of embracing in visual with the scent that spreads around that reminds other emotional striking; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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This speaks about the feeling and sensation of embracing in visual with the scent that spreads around that reminds other emotional striking; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Thank you Dr ALD. I appreciate your review and insightful comments. ~DD
Comment from Anntonette
Love how you chose cursive as the font, its elegance goes well with your loving words. This is very romantic, I love romanticism, I am studying it now in university (The history part of romanticism though) So this piece spoke to me!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Love how you chose cursive as the font, its elegance goes well with your loving words. This is very romantic, I love romanticism, I am studying it now in university (The history part of romanticism though) So this piece spoke to me!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Thank You Anntonette. I appreciate your thoughtful comments on my short 5-7-5 love themed poem. ~DD
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A warm remembrance here in these words where the senses linger on perfume an the memory of the embrace, I enjoyed the experience, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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A warm remembrance here in these words where the senses linger on perfume an the memory of the embrace, I enjoyed the experience, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Thank you Dolly for the nice review on my short 5-7-5 poem. Your comments are appreciated. ~DD
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! What a superbly sensual poem! I like that you use the sense of smell that creates that warm feeling that's below skin deep. The smell actual remains, lingering and embracing. And that picture so perfectly illustrates your poem!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Wow! What a superbly sensual poem! I like that you use the sense of smell that creates that warm feeling that's below skin deep. The smell actual remains, lingering and embracing. And that picture so perfectly illustrates your poem!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Lyenochka, what a wonderful review and shower of stars. Thank you so much for your most thoughtful review. I am grateful. ~DDx
Comment from Honey Bee Jean
I like warmth under your skin. That's very clever and speaks volumes. It's somethig you feel inside of you passed the senses. Very well done. Happy writing and best to you in all your endeavors!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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I like warmth under your skin. That's very clever and speaks volumes. It's somethig you feel inside of you passed the senses. Very well done. Happy writing and best to you in all your endeavors!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018
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Thank you Honey Bee Jean for taking the time to review my short poem 5-7-5. Your encouraging comments are appreciated. ~DD
