Beyond The Wall
How many walls do we have around us.34 total reviews
Comment from AngieDee
Your story brought tears to my eyes it is so beautiful. It has very strong imagery and a powerful message that will linger in the mind for a long time. Thankyou for sharing it and God bless.
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Your story brought tears to my eyes it is so beautiful. It has very strong imagery and a powerful message that will linger in the mind for a long time. Thankyou for sharing it and God bless.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. It's been a blessing to everyone that's read it. Many thanks for the kind words.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Lady Jane
This was a powerful read. Well written with excellent metaphor and imagery. The truth midst your pearls of wisdom resonate and this write is so very timely. We need to realize the walls we're building...and, they're not the good kind. Clean, crisp write with excellent imagery and pacing. Nothing not to like. I am sure your friend found this very helpful. It's a great piece.
Janelle
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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This was a powerful read. Well written with excellent metaphor and imagery. The truth midst your pearls of wisdom resonate and this write is so very timely. We need to realize the walls we're building...and, they're not the good kind. Clean, crisp write with excellent imagery and pacing. Nothing not to like. I am sure your friend found this very helpful. It's a great piece.
Janelle
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. It's been a blessing to everyone that's read it. Many thanks for the kind words.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from apky
This is certainly a great eye opener. You penned something that should be thought-provoking to all of us in these troubled times we live in. We should join hands and turn to the Lord. We should love each other, help each other, share with each other.
An excellent essay.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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This is certainly a great eye opener. You penned something that should be thought-provoking to all of us in these troubled times we live in. We should join hands and turn to the Lord. We should love each other, help each other, share with each other.
An excellent essay.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Amen, girl! With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. It's been a blessing to everyone that's read it. Many thanks for the kind words.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sanku
This is a write up that is steeped in faith. The wall is figurative .It divides Him and the person and when you learn more you go higher in spiritual realm and the ultimate wisdom sets in
it is beautifully written.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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This is a write up that is steeped in faith. The wall is figurative .It divides Him and the person and when you learn more you go higher in spiritual realm and the ultimate wisdom sets in
it is beautifully written.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. Many thanks for the kind words.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from susand3022
It should definitely work. It's very clear to see how you have made the wall to represent all of the things we use to separate ourselves from each other these days. I really think that is where we have lost our way. Everyone is afraid. Everyone hides indoors and plays video games now. Bricking in their children and themselves. We no longer just send our children out to play and tell them to be home for dinner or by dark. People no longer congregate outside in the evening and talk with all the neighbors. We've lost our neighborhoods in the cities. Brick, brick, brick...so sad.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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It should definitely work. It's very clear to see how you have made the wall to represent all of the things we use to separate ourselves from each other these days. I really think that is where we have lost our way. Everyone is afraid. Everyone hides indoors and plays video games now. Bricking in their children and themselves. We no longer just send our children out to play and tell them to be home for dinner or by dark. People no longer congregate outside in the evening and talk with all the neighbors. We've lost our neighborhoods in the cities. Brick, brick, brick...so sad.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. Many thanks for the kind words.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from mermaids
This is an excellent faith based story that shows how we can become closer to God by reading His word. Your use of words shows a vivid dream and you also show how a person grows when he or she becomes close to God.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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This is an excellent faith based story that shows how we can become closer to God by reading His word. Your use of words shows a vivid dream and you also show how a person grows when he or she becomes close to God.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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With this story, all of the glory goes to God He led me through the whole process.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Jim Hirtle
Mike, I think this could be made into a wonderful full length story of exploring our walk with Christ; a 21st century Pilgrim's Progress. The brevity of this piece, perhaps driven by the need to deliver it to your friend, explains the 3 star rating.
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Mike, I think this could be made into a wonderful full length story of exploring our walk with Christ; a 21st century Pilgrim's Progress. The brevity of this piece, perhaps driven by the need to deliver it to your friend, explains the 3 star rating.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. Many thanks for the kind words and your help with the story.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent. Very inspirational. It reminds of the dream I had. Saint Peter met me at the pearly gates, handed me a piece of chalk and pointed to a long stairway. He said to write down one sin on each step and let me know when you're done. I went down a couple of levels and saw someone far away running up the steps. It took him a long time to reach me. When he did I asked him where he was going.
"I need more chalk."
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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This is excellent. Very inspirational. It reminds of the dream I had. Saint Peter met me at the pearly gates, handed me a piece of chalk and pointed to a long stairway. He said to write down one sin on each step and let me know when you're done. I went down a couple of levels and saw someone far away running up the steps. It took him a long time to reach me. When he did I asked him where he was going.
"I need more chalk."
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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We all need more chalk! With this story, all the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. Many thanks for the kind words, my friend!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written spiritual story/dream. There are much truth in this story and dream. The more you start to know about God and His Word, the closer we get to His throne in heaven and even become like Him.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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A very well-written spiritual story/dream. There are much truth in this story and dream. The more you start to know about God and His Word, the closer we get to His throne in heaven and even become like Him.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Hello, my friend. With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from KjSilver
This gives a good perspective on the story of our lives. I found it interesting, enlightening, and moving. It was written very well and flowed like the dream it was. I even felt a little emotion flush my face as I neared the end of the story.
Very well done.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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This gives a good perspective on the story of our lives. I found it interesting, enlightening, and moving. It was written very well and flowed like the dream it was. I even felt a little emotion flush my face as I neared the end of the story.
Very well done.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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With this story, all of the glory goes to God. He led me through the whole process. Many thanks for the kind words.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
