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A collection of poems showcasing unusual words

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Comment from tfawcus
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You had me going with this one, Craig. I must have been half asleep! I hope the code fools those of Pmurt's supporters who are set on blowing the opposition sky high. One can never be too careful these days!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
    Seems they are coming out of the woodwork all over the place, Tony. Troubling times. Many thanks, Craig
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Enjoyed your humorous piece and yes, I did read the names backwards and found exactly what you meant. I cannot understand why Mr. Pmurt wouldn't use his influence and wealth to build new ellivpmurt palaces in Sarudnoh and create jobs to allow people to stay there. That would be a win-win.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
    Perhaps you should politely suggest it to him, Helen? Many thanks, Craig
reply by lyenochka on 28-Oct-2018
    Lol. I don't think he'd listen
Comment from BeasPeas
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Easy for you to say way down there. Again, we cannot take in everyone. It is impossible. You would not like it either. It depletes every resource legal citizens need to take care of ourselves. Open border people will get the message when they realize their taxes are paying to support the throngs storming our border. There isn't enough money, healthcare or resources in the world to support such numbers. But, no minds will be changed until the full impact hits them, so why bother. No one who lives in an American border state is for open borders. If they say they are, it's because they are part of the problem and benefiting from it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Indeed you can't take in every single person "storming the borders", Marilyn. But it's more about attitude. I'd venture to say if the leader of pretty much any other country in the western world had been caught describing other sovereign nations as "shithole countries", they would have been dumped. Or they wouldn't have had to, they'd have resigned out of pure shame. Not so your illustrious Head of State, he has none (shame, that is, as he repeatedly demonstrates). And the siege mentality he seeks to build is working just fine. So I guess he can be well pleased with his efforts.
reply by BeasPeas on 27-Oct-2018
    Went to a Trump rally the other night. Highlight on my bucket list. If he can save my country, I'm all for the guy. Otherwise we will become a socialist/communist country with nothing to offer anybody. Those on the left are pretty vile. Maybe your the news from your country doesn't report the vile and viciousness offered by the left. Citizens cannot admit they are Trumpites (like me) for fear of being assaulted. Yes, actually assaulted, spat upon, bullied, property destroyed. What happened to those peaceniks, those loving, warm-fuzzy democrats as they like to tout themselves--all sweetness and light?

    Conservatives go to their Trump rallies because we finally actually hear a voice of sanity/common sense. We keep cards close to vest so as not to be a target of those who would hurt us. Frankly, Trump is a breath of fresh air. Tells it like it is. I'm like that myself and admire not shilly-shallying around. It is what it is and truth be told, liberals will do anything to subvert the opposition. Frightening.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Frightening, indeed.
reply by BeasPeas on 28-Oct-2018
    I lived in NY for many years. That's the New Yorker in him coming out. They take no guff from anybody and I love it. They tell it like it is. How refreshing is that? He doesn't dance on the head of a pin--unlike politicians who speak but say nothing and think citizenry are fools. He's touched a live nerve in a supposedly dead tooth and that tooth is screaming for attention.

    The left is heading toward global rule with open borders. Eventually it will succeed. We will have what is called "The New World Order" with a central gov of unknowns who will make all the decisions for the world itself. There will be no ability to choose our own leaders. I won't be here (I hope) by then, but perhaps my kids and grandkids will be. It will be total chaos, but at the same time, total control by unelected elites. Clinton himself said there is no escaping going totally global. Leftists think this will be Utopia, but it will not be that at all. The right is shoveling against the tide and we know that, trying desperately to hold the line against the inevitable. When the left wakes up--it will be too late. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
    Robert Bowers, Cesar Sayoc...

    yep, got to watch those leftist lunatics.
reply by BeasPeas on 29-Oct-2018
    Yes, I agree. Mental illness has many degrees of expression. These two are the ultimate. We must eliminate Sayoc from the equation, though, as his driving force, I believe, is prejudice not political. But who is to know that?

    Regarding political misbehavior, it's important to consider the inequality of the left harassing the right. If you kick a dog often enough it will ultimately bite you. Those who taunt and bully, with no expectation of rebuff suffer under delusion. One cannot forever dismiss the meanness of another, as in examples previously given (spitting at, shouting down, harassment in restaurants, destruction of property, threats of personal violence). Sooner or later it reaches a boiling point.

    The truth of the matter is that NOBODY likes it when an opposing candidate gets into office. But that's what we have to endure for the time being whether we like it or not. No matter which way the mid-term elections go here in America next week, it will be volatile. The border issue is a powder keg. We're in for some tough times here.

    I envy you living in a country where you don't have to worry about such things. Your populace is self contained--most countries don't have that luxury, plus you have strict immigration laws with politicians who back them up. We don't have that here. It's a free-for-all and I DO mean that. Free everything for those who storm our borders--free education, free medical, free social services. Those illegally entering even get voting rights with everyone looking the other way. America is on the downslide and will never recover from the errors being made now.

    Just bend over and kiss your country's ground. You're a lucky man. Marilyn
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Your mind is so fascinating, so unlike mine. Your creativity has blown mine to smithereens weeks ago. What made you pick on poor Honduras? It makes such a good anonymity for savage peoples.
You outdid yourself this time. I'm out of sixes.

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Thanks so much for the wonderful comments, Debbie. I have no idea how my brain works, maybe it's broken. I appreciate the virtual six. Are you feeling refreshed after your cruise? I hope you had a good time, it seems it was a short one, or else time is just rushing by leaving me in its wake, which is how it appears some days.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Today's use of the word, which is formed by reversing the letter of an existing word, has rightly been used giving a literary sense with fun and interest; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Thank you, much appreciated. Craig
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
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Yes, a few visits to google dictionary for this one, but well worth the time. Another very clever and meaningful poem. The use of adjective nouns fits in beautifully.
Technology has us all on the run.....in one way or another
Brilliant
Mitchell

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Thanks very much, Mitchell. I appreciate the lovely comments. Craig
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem using ananym to key words that will make sense to very few people who can figure out the secret words that are used throughout the poem.

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Thanks very much, Sandra. I appreciate the kind review. Craig
Comment from Pamusart
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I love this one Craig. I am not sure how familiar with our politics. This is, of course, only my opinion. Republicans have a shrinking party because of their tactics. They only care about their wealthy benefactors and screw everyone else. Why are they still represented as majorities in government, you may ask. The simple answer is that they lie. Enough
Stupid voters believe them. Also they fear monger. Democrats
Are a left wing mob (because they protest peacefully). The caravan was created by a top Democrat donor is one lie about that. Another is that ISIS and MS13 gang members are rampant in the caravan. It is just like
2014 where they fear mongered about Ebola like Obama had let a plague get into the country. They named him Obola. So here is another big lie. They are claiming that they will ensure that insurance companies cover pre-existing conditions. They ALL voted multiple times to kill Obamacare. They told the people that Obamacare was bad and it cost a lot. So ignorant republicans believed them and voted to get rid of Obamacare. This is how stupid those people are. Many of them have preexisting conditions AND Obamacare. It is also called The Affordable Care Act or ACA. You ask them what they think about Obamacare and they want to get rid of it. Ask about ACA and they love it. Republicans and trump have tried at every turn to get rid of it. Some of those lying republicans are part of a lawsuit to let insurance companies opt out of covering people with preexisting conditions. So disgusting. Meanwhile our debt rose by 1.5 trillion because of a tax bill for the wealthy So they lie knowing their voters don't know anything and will believe them. Especially when all of them lie together. Trump and his allies just dispute all of the real news and make them and the democrats into villains. Also republicans have more wealthy donors than do democrats.
Republicans do all this because of shifting demographics. Racist whites are afraid that once whites are not the plurality, the "others" will treat them the way they treated the "others". Minorities including brown immigrants from Central America vote democratic because republicans are so racist and anti immigrant, what can they expect. We believe in an inclusive society with equality for all. And equal opportunity. We welcome people with good reason for
Requesting asylum. They are fleeing war and gangs. Many mothers already lost murdered sons to the gang. And then join a caravan to save their other kids. We believe that health care is a right not a privilege. That disadvantaged, elderly, sick and disabled should be cared for. Most are anti-gun. I am anti semiautomatic weapons. But I am ok with hand guns. Most of us were against the Iraq war. So republicans lie in unison and bully. Because so many vile republicans lie and the voter hears it from multiple people they believe it. They only watch FOX news which parrots the same lies. They thing the truth is fake news. It is very scary in this country right now. If democrats win back the house, trump and all of his cronies will claim that the election was rigged. Trump likes to divide the country as much as possible. Russia is trying to mess around in election data bases. It would not surprised if they choose one state where the democrats win. Russia will elevate the number of democratic votes. That won't match the paper ballot. So he'll
Claim the democrats cheated. I hope not. He is trying to start a civil war of his tribe versus the "others" including whites like me. Voter suppression is going on in several states with close races. Voters purged, ballots rejected and the voter is never informed so he can correct it. Our founding fathers foresaw a president like trump. But not a congress that never checks him. Thanks for listening. Great poem by the way. I enjoyed the italics. Thank you for sharing

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    In this day and age, Pam, the rest of the world has a much better knowledge, and takes a much keener interest in what goes on in the States than in previous generations. Global media is a powerful thing. It's also a dangerous thing, when so much of it is controlled by people like Murdoch (and worse). One reason we are entitled to be interested is not just because we can also suffer recriminations due to what some jerk in the White House says or does, but inevitably other leaders of similar ilk are encouraged to follow suit with lunatic policies.

    I hear you, and I agree with all you say. Thanks for the most thoughtful review.

    Craig
reply by Pamusart on 27-Oct-2018
    Smile
Comment from Gloria ....
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Well this isn't an emordnilap but it most certainly in ananym. I guess things are getting really bad when one has to use enigmatic code to speak truth to power.

Great job Craig, and did you make a wee typo in Anadec? Shouldn't it be Anadac? LOL

Much need laugh on the Friday before Halloween. :)

gloria

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Oops, I did indeed, Gloria. Abject apologies, and now corrected :) Many thanks once again, Craig