Catzilla
Some things do not mix.21 total reviews
Comment from Realist101
Hahahahhaahhaaaaa!!!!!! OML. LOL!!! Well, I guess I'm not alone in the horror stuff! :D She buried her cat! I guess I might have too. I had to laugh picturing the shreds. The tail switching in evil glee! Yes, part two is a good idea! ROTHFLMRO! :D
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Hahahahhaahhaaaaa!!!!!! OML. LOL!!! Well, I guess I'm not alone in the horror stuff! :D She buried her cat! I guess I might have too. I had to laugh picturing the shreds. The tail switching in evil glee! Yes, part two is a good idea! ROTHFLMRO! :D
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thank you my Realist101 friend. If I made you laugh, my work is complete. We need more laughter these days. So glad you enjoyed Catzilla!
All my best,
Sally
Comment from country ranch writer
AWE A BIT DRASTIC ON ONES PART THE KILLING OF THE KITTY THAT WASNT VERY WITTY HE WAS ONLY HAVING FUN AND DIDNT REALISE IT WAS WRONG.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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AWE A BIT DRASTIC ON ONES PART THE KILLING OF THE KITTY THAT WASNT VERY WITTY HE WAS ONLY HAVING FUN AND DIDNT REALISE IT WAS WRONG.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review! I did not kill Catzilla, he died from pearl and lace consumption. He died by his own hands..I mean paws. You do sound very poetic in your accusation, but I present the facts. Death by consumption of non-food particles. Thanks for stopping by!
All my very best,
Sally the non-cat murderer
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent wh a clever poem at the end. I love clever writing. It shows a good mind at work. I had a sister-in-law named Sally. Whenever I see your name I think of her.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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This is excellent wh a clever poem at the end. I love clever writing. It shows a good mind at work. I had a sister-in-law named Sally. Whenever I see your name I think of her.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you Thomas for the excellent review of my writing and style. I am glad at my age to have a mind to write with! I had fun with this and personally needed a good laugh. I am glad I made so many FanStory readers laugh along with me and Catzilla.
All my best,
Sally
Comment from Donka Kristeva
I was intrigued because it was humour fiction and short. Hilarious! Its beginning is already a warning. The story becomes more engaging and funnier but what reads on the tombstone tops it all! "No cat heaven for him". Great humour
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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I was intrigued because it was humour fiction and short. Hilarious! Its beginning is already a warning. The story becomes more engaging and funnier but what reads on the tombstone tops it all! "No cat heaven for him". Great humour
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you Donka! I appreciate your review and comments. I am glad it made you laugh. I was just informed, I won second place in the contest! How fun!
All my best,
Sally
Comment from Lady Jane
Oh my goodness. I wish I had a six, Sally. This was so very funny. Ok, not funny, but so very cleverly writing. Poor kitty, I mean, bad kitty! The writing was good, the tension, excellent, the end, absolutely fun! Well written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Oh, yeah! Word count is spot on!!!
janelle
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Oh my goodness. I wish I had a six, Sally. This was so very funny. Ok, not funny, but so very cleverly writing. Poor kitty, I mean, bad kitty! The writing was good, the tension, excellent, the end, absolutely fun! Well written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Oh, yeah! Word count is spot on!!!
janelle
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you Janelle! A fun write for me and I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for rooting for me in the contest. You know I love contests!
Love,
Sally
Comment from donette1914
lol so creative and simply brilliant
you write very well with well-chosen words
it runs very smoothly
very talented and thank you for sharing
it was a pleasure I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 oct 26 2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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lol so creative and simply brilliant
you write very well with well-chosen words
it runs very smoothly
very talented and thank you for sharing
it was a pleasure I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 oct 26 2018
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Thank you Donette for the excellent review and comments! If I made you laugh, my work is complete. We need to laugh more here on FanStory! So glad you enjoyed Catzilla.
All my best,
Sally
Comment from Linda Kay
Any cat owner can relate to this. The cat waited for the perfect opportunity. Catzilla's epitaph was a perfect and unique ending for the piece. Good luck in the contest (I entered too:)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Any cat owner can relate to this. The cat waited for the perfect opportunity. Catzilla's epitaph was a perfect and unique ending for the piece. Good luck in the contest (I entered too:)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Thank you Linda for the excellent review and comments. Yes, Catzilla was a piece of work. I think we all just need to laugh more here on FanStory! I am so pleased you enjoyed the story!
All my best to you, and in the contest,
Sally
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! I can imagine that happening, they do love to claw at anything hanging, I've had a few dresses and a leather jacket ruined by my darling pets over the years. This is a really fun contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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LOL! I can imagine that happening, they do love to claw at anything hanging, I've had a few dresses and a leather jacket ruined by my darling pets over the years. This is a really fun contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Thank you Sandra for the excellent review and comments. I am amazed at how many people think this is real. I replied that Catzilla, although horrible, is a fictional cat of my imagination. Thank you for joining in the good fun! I think we need more laughter here on FanStory!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment from pbomar1115
What I know about people and their pets, which I feel animals get more considerations than humans, they love them unconditionally. I had to check to see if this was really fiction. For a split second, you restored my faith in mankind.
Phillip
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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What I know about people and their pets, which I feel animals get more considerations than humans, they love them unconditionally. I had to check to see if this was really fiction. For a split second, you restored my faith in mankind.
Phillip
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review! Yes, Catzilla is fiction, a character of my imagination. He died from ingesting the lace and pearls on my wedding dress train. This I do know about cats, they can die of fur balls. I am glad you could stop by today for the review and critique.
All my best?
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah!
Heinous describes this feline perfectly. Oh my goodness! Have owned many cats in my life. Loved them all. None ever ate wedding dresses, but one had the horrible habit of coming down with anxiety attacks when we left her alone. The floor registers never fully recovered.
Now...this may seem "picky," but I wonder if the situation would be a tad more believable if this feline of yours ate your protagonist's veil as opposed to the entire dress. Just a thought. Not a criticism...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hah!
Heinous describes this feline perfectly. Oh my goodness! Have owned many cats in my life. Loved them all. None ever ate wedding dresses, but one had the horrible habit of coming down with anxiety attacks when we left her alone. The floor registers never fully recovered.
Now...this may seem "picky," but I wonder if the situation would be a tad more believable if this feline of yours ate your protagonist's veil as opposed to the entire dress. Just a thought. Not a criticism...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review and comments! Tis the train of the dress that killed poor old Catzilla! Pearls, lace and all! At least in my imagination anyway. Remember this is flash fiction. I had fun with him and may do a sequel. Thanks for stopping by for a laugh!
All my best,
Catzilla?s former owner
