A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
Viewing comments for Chapter 295 "The Skydiver"A collection of poems showcasing unusual words
18 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
this is wonderful.
Of course, you have us all (me, at least) wondering if you really did it. Did you parachute?
Cute, cute poem, great rhymes and humor.
I wish the committee had nominated another of mine than it did. It will anger some.
And most of mine try to be humorous. oh, well. Yours should do well! good luck.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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this is wonderful.
Of course, you have us all (me, at least) wondering if you really did it. Did you parachute?
Cute, cute poem, great rhymes and humor.
I wish the committee had nominated another of mine than it did. It will anger some.
And most of mine try to be humorous. oh, well. Yours should do well! good luck.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 07-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Oh no, no way I'm jumping out of a tin can from 3 miles up with only a sheet to slow me down. That little poem was pure fiction.
I'm not sure why that one of mine got nominated either, but I'll take it. It doesn't stand a chance, but I'm thrilled to be in the list.
I'll save commenting about yours for when I review it, which will be any minute now :)
Many thanks,
Craig
Comment from Linda Kay
After a very long Fanstory hiatus, I am so many words behind in your poetry vocabulary project. I enjoyed the tone with the " tally hoe, stiff upper lip, etc." and the fact that you had both possible outcomes covered from your parachute adventure!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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After a very long Fanstory hiatus, I am so many words behind in your poetry vocabulary project. I enjoyed the tone with the " tally hoe, stiff upper lip, etc." and the fact that you had both possible outcomes covered from your parachute adventure!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Welcome back. I have, more than once, wondered when you would return. I'm not sure if that thing called "life" got in the way, or you just needed a break from our fun community (I've found myself in that situation before). In either case, glad to see you again :)
Comment from Impromptu Scribe
Another great rhyming poem filled with mirth :) The word 'brolly-hop' conjurs up images of Mary Poppins gently floating towards earth whilst clutching a large golfing umbrella. Your poem reminds me of one of my favourite quotations: "Better to reach your deathbed with regrets for things done rather than remorses for things never tried." -- Alex Morritt
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Another great rhyming poem filled with mirth :) The word 'brolly-hop' conjurs up images of Mary Poppins gently floating towards earth whilst clutching a large golfing umbrella. Your poem reminds me of one of my favourite quotations: "Better to reach your deathbed with regrets for things done rather than remorses for things never tried." -- Alex Morritt
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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I thought it was very Poppinsesque as well. I had an ex-RAF man comment he'd never heard the term, but I think it may have been popular before his time. Cheers, Craig
Comment from damommy
Let me know how your brolly-hopping goes. This is a hilarious poem that gave me a hearty laugh. I don't think I'm brave enough to jump from a perfectly good airplane, but I admire anyone who does. As always, you have good meter and rhyme. Great reading fun.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Let me know how your brolly-hopping goes. This is a hilarious poem that gave me a hearty laugh. I don't think I'm brave enough to jump from a perfectly good airplane, but I admire anyone who does. As always, you have good meter and rhyme. Great reading fun.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanks very much for the lovely comments. I'm with you, I've checked my back, and find no sign of wings... so I'll stay firmly planted on the ground :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from ciliverde
Now that is a great poem to go with the word brolly-hop. It seems to have British origins, since we don't use a brolly here in the states. In fact, I rarely use anything like it since it never rains here!
Nice job, Craig,
Carol
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Now that is a great poem to go with the word brolly-hop. It seems to have British origins, since we don't use a brolly here in the states. In fact, I rarely use anything like it since it never rains here!
Nice job, Craig,
Carol
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Pretty much the same here, Carol. And getting worse every year. Just a natural thing, you know... nothing to do with us ;-)
Most appreciated,
Craig
Comment from Loredana
Humorous and, as usual, beautifully written. The rhyme and rhythm just make this poem fun to read and remember. I'm going to use it with my students during the poetry unit. Enjoy your brolly-hop or brolly-hopping.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Humorous and, as usual, beautifully written. The rhyme and rhythm just make this poem fun to read and remember. I'm going to use it with my students during the poetry unit. Enjoy your brolly-hop or brolly-hopping.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Well, I'm tickled pink that you would honour me by sharing my poem with your students. Hope they enjoy, as I enjoyed the delightful comments and rating. Craig
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You crack me up. Tickle pink. LOL
Comment from Aussie
For some reason, this reminded me of Mary Poppins and her magic umbrella. I think your poem speaks oodles of bravery under the silk. Not too many people would take the dive!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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For some reason, this reminded me of Mary Poppins and her magic umbrella. I think your poem speaks oodles of bravery under the silk. Not too many people would take the dive!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Maybe it was the prim and proper accent? I for one won't be jumping out of anything from 2 1/2 miles up, brolly or not. Many thanks, Craig
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Mary Poppins was born in my city of Maryborough, Queensland; she wrote Mary Poppins when she and her father went back to England.
Comment from dragonpoet
The speaker has made a good decision to try what he wants to do. But I don't know if I would try. I figure parasailing (which I have done) is close enough for me. You joke about the chute not opening. But my cousin did it and his didn't open soon enough and he broke his back. Though luckily he had no paralysis from the fall.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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The speaker has made a good decision to try what he wants to do. But I don't know if I would try. I figure parasailing (which I have done) is close enough for me. You joke about the chute not opening. But my cousin did it and his didn't open soon enough and he broke his back. Though luckily he had no paralysis from the fall.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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It sounds like he is a very lucky man, Joan. Thanks for the kind review, Craig
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He is lucky. You're very kindly welcome, Craig.
Joan
Comment from Debbie Pope
This was way to much fun for anything short of a six star rating? Toodle-pip? Is that an obscure Australian quip? I love it, especially juxtaposed with tally-ho. You never know how your work will be received. I love this piece.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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This was way to much fun for anything short of a six star rating? Toodle-pip? Is that an obscure Australian quip? I love it, especially juxtaposed with tally-ho. You never know how your work will be received. I love this piece.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Toodle-pip is British. It's a very friendly version of "goodbye", or "see you later". Both it and tally-ho need to be said in a very proper royal accent, they wouldn't work in a Cockney accent :) I'm glad this silly thing seems to have brought a smile to your face, and most grateful for the lovely comments and delightful rating.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun word, Craig. Your poem describes it well. Good job on the rhymes, smooth flow, and fun approach. I enjoyed reading this work. Your picture is perfect. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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What a fun word, Craig. Your poem describes it well. Good job on the rhymes, smooth flow, and fun approach. I enjoyed reading this work. Your picture is perfect. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much, Jan. I appreciate the lovely comments.
