I Love You
I challenged myself to write about this picture15 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
You see? This is an example of what I mean when I say you write the most beautiful romantic verse -- "Fed by the offerings of life, your love makes sure I savour every morsel" has so many wonderful meanings = 'he' keeps you safe, 'he' ensures you understand and appreciate your experiences, etc., etc.
Lovely, Missy. As usual. :))
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
You see? This is an example of what I mean when I say you write the most beautiful romantic verse -- "Fed by the offerings of life, your love makes sure I savour every morsel" has so many wonderful meanings = 'he' keeps you safe, 'he' ensures you understand and appreciate your experiences, etc., etc.
Lovely, Missy. As usual. :))
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Muwahhhh dawlin! Thank you :)
Always
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Mwahh right back. :)
Comment from Teri7
This is very well written and so beautiful with love in it. You used great words and they went well with the nice art work. Best wishes in your endeavors. Let us know when it happens. I love to guy cards and give them when necessary! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
This is very well written and so beautiful with love in it. You used great words and they went well with the nice art work. Best wishes in your endeavors. Let us know when it happens. I love to guy cards and give them when necessary! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thank you very much.
Always
Justafan
Comment from Linda Engel
Good for you. It is a great avenue for writers. I really loved this one. Sometimes we just need a good card to say what we are feeling. We don't go around talking like this BUT.. if we can read it in a card the words are so much better. Let us know how it goes. and good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
Good for you. It is a great avenue for writers. I really loved this one. Sometimes we just need a good card to say what we are feeling. We don't go around talking like this BUT.. if we can read it in a card the words are so much better. Let us know how it goes. and good luck.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thank you very much, Linda. I hope to find a market for them.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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try some independent gift shops first or some craft shows.
Comment from Richard J
So very beautiful, Missy!
I do not know about the greeting card aspect of this gorgeously sweet Free Verse, but I do know that if it were written to me, my heart would be dancing right out of my chest.
I "love" the picture, soft pink presentation, and how your tender heart speaks.
Thank you for sharing You! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
So very beautiful, Missy!
I do not know about the greeting card aspect of this gorgeously sweet Free Verse, but I do know that if it were written to me, my heart would be dancing right out of my chest.
I "love" the picture, soft pink presentation, and how your tender heart speaks.
Thank you for sharing You! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Aww, what a beautiful thing to say.
I will treasure this review.
The 6 is a plus but the review is 10!
Thank you,
Missy
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You turn review thanks into a sweet caress! : )
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Smilin
Comment from BeasPeas
Wonderful poem and congratulations on starting your new venture. I wish you every success. I think this is the kind of greeting card that would appeal to many. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
Wonderful poem and congratulations on starting your new venture. I wish you every success. I think this is the kind of greeting card that would appeal to many. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I hope it will find a willing market. Thank you for the lovely review.
Always Justafan
Missy
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, so good to see you back my sweet friend....how could you not love some who makes you feel every morsel of that love...I love your first greeting card sweet girl...and know you will be a success...sure did miss you...love your poem...and love this picture...so very nicely written you...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
HI Missy, so good to see you back my sweet friend....how could you not love some who makes you feel every morsel of that love...I love your first greeting card sweet girl...and know you will be a success...sure did miss you...love your poem...and love this picture...so very nicely written you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Linda, Linda, LINDA!
It?s so good to see your name here!
Thank you for the review and the oh so warm welcome.
Always Justafan of yours
Missy
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LOL you....always more than a pleasure...just so glad to see you back...want to see more of your cards...loveeeeeeeeee to you...Linda xxoo
Comment from jmdg1954
Well, if I came across this card while card shopping, I would certainly purchase it.
The first line was tremendous-
Fed by the offerings
Of life
Your love makes sure
I savor every morsel
Well said and best of luck with the project.
John
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
Well, if I came across this card while card shopping, I would certainly purchase it.
The first line was tremendous-
Fed by the offerings
Of life
Your love makes sure
I savor every morsel
Well said and best of luck with the project.
John
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Muwahhhh! Thank you.
It?s good to be back.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Sankey
Loved your poem. Have not seen you around for a long time. Where ya bin? Also loved the artwork. Well done. I am nearing publishing of my autobiography. "The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go" Doing an Acknowledgement Page for all the reviewers that have helped me over the 5 years I have been putting the book together. Bit sad about the number of reviewers that are no longer with FS. Cheers.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
Loved your poem. Have not seen you around for a long time. Where ya bin? Also loved the artwork. Well done. I am nearing publishing of my autobiography. "The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go" Doing an Acknowledgement Page for all the reviewers that have helped me over the 5 years I have been putting the book together. Bit sad about the number of reviewers that are no longer with FS. Cheers.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi there. I?m delighted to see your name here sir.
I will pop over and read a chapter or two for you :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
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Hi there. I?m delighted to see your name here sir.
I will pop over and read a chapter or two for you :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
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Thanks Missy. As I said had not seen you in a while. Are we fans? Will check and fix.
Comment from Mark Valentine
Been a while since I've seen a post from you - good to come across this one.
I can definitely see this as a birthday card to a loved one - the cake metaphor makes it a natural fit. The sentiment expressed and the words you use to express it, certainly surpass a lot of the trite stuff that one finds in greeting cards.
Very nice - good luck with the greeting card project - you'll do great!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
Been a while since I've seen a post from you - good to come across this one.
I can definitely see this as a birthday card to a loved one - the cake metaphor makes it a natural fit. The sentiment expressed and the words you use to express it, certainly surpass a lot of the trite stuff that one finds in greeting cards.
Very nice - good luck with the greeting card project - you'll do great!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi you. I missed all the beautiful words and the people who breathe life into them.
Thank you for the lovely ?welcome back ?
Always Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Sally Law
I apologize I do not have a six for you! Wonderfully done! I would buy this in a heartbeat! Your photo and formatting, perfect! Hope to see more of your fine work here on FanStory!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
I apologize I do not have a six for you! Wonderfully done! I would buy this in a heartbeat! Your photo and formatting, perfect! Hope to see more of your fine work here on FanStory!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Smilin
Thank you, Sally for this confidence booster. Your words gave the proverbial ?6?.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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You?re so welcome Missy! Sal :+)