Where'd You Go?
M.T.A (Missing The Action)25 total reviews
Comment from Nathan Allen
Wow just a one of a kind experience that draws you in right away with it sense of devil may care.
It carries python esque farce and weirdness that is sorely missing from this world.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Wow just a one of a kind experience that draws you in right away with it sense of devil may care.
It carries python esque farce and weirdness that is sorely missing from this world.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Hahaha..thank you so much for the 6 star review. :)
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!..
I thought this poem was hilarious.
It made me think of that woman that castrated an unfaithful husband (?) and the police went searching for the severed di&k.
They had luck and the doctors were able to re-attach it ..not sure if it worked but at least he could pee without making a mess.
Very inventive.... the part I like most :
I hopped upon his forest black,
front and center 'tween his sac.
The thought occurs,
well what the hell!
Will this require a magic spell?
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Ciao!..
I thought this poem was hilarious.
It made me think of that woman that castrated an unfaithful husband (?) and the police went searching for the severed di&k.
They had luck and the doctors were able to re-attach it ..not sure if it worked but at least he could pee without making a mess.
Very inventive.... the part I like most :
I hopped upon his forest black,
front and center 'tween his sac.
The thought occurs,
well what the hell!
Will this require a magic spell?
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Thank you! My kids were mortified by this poem when i wrote it, but i really liked it. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from lancellot
Well, that was two ways to have a happy ending. This was funny and well rhymed. I think your usual stanza format would suit this better.
notes:
a skillful surgeons help indeed.
-a skillful surgeon's help indeed.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Well, that was two ways to have a happy ending. This was funny and well rhymed. I think your usual stanza format would suit this better.
notes:
a skillful surgeons help indeed.
-a skillful surgeon's help indeed.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I love the humor in a flying penis!! Haha! The rhyming is perfect and I don't think this writing prompt could be done any better! Great job! Yes, it is truly a gem!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I love the humor in a flying penis!! Haha! The rhyming is perfect and I don't think this writing prompt could be done any better! Great job! Yes, it is truly a gem!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much, l truly appreciate it. :)
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is what I love about writing prompts - they give rise to things I never expected to read ... like a poem from the perspective of a flying willy! I hesitate to mention tongues and cheeks in this context, but I did enjoy the playful tone and you kept me smiling all the way through. Loved it :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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This is what I love about writing prompts - they give rise to things I never expected to read ... like a poem from the perspective of a flying willy! I hesitate to mention tongues and cheeks in this context, but I did enjoy the playful tone and you kept me smiling all the way through. Loved it :-)
Mike
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Hahaha...wish I'd thought of tongues and/or cheeks for my poem! Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
After all, his penis flown off around, at last his girlfriend came and the story ends, it is amusing and entertaining like a fantasy, a poem has good flow of thoughts and imagery; Well said, well done, post god speed more; b a classic-good (rare) theist writer, post 4 God; may pray FS sick Free Member Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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After all, his penis flown off around, at last his girlfriend came and the story ends, it is amusing and entertaining like a fantasy, a poem has good flow of thoughts and imagery; Well said, well done, post god speed more; b a classic-good (rare) theist writer, post 4 God; may pray FS sick Free Member Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Great review, thank you! So glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
This is funny. I didn't want to visualize it. It's kind of raunchy and silly but that's okay. The presentation is nice. Good job.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
This is funny. I didn't want to visualize it. It's kind of raunchy and silly but that's okay. The presentation is nice. Good job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Sometimes you have to be silly! Thanks for reading. ;)
Comment from kahpot
Well I thoroughly enjoyed this humorous romp, with your descriptive and very well chosen words, A pity you had to withdraw from the prompt, love your artwork (photo) looks very real painful even, very well presented work****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Well I thoroughly enjoyed this humorous romp, with your descriptive and very well chosen words, A pity you had to withdraw from the prompt, love your artwork (photo) looks very real painful even, very well presented work****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reading! Just a bit of silliness on a chilly Minnesota day. :)
Comment from Ricky1024
"Where'd You Go?"
Lorena and John Bobbitt?
Pop goes the weasel to who knows where?
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Sausage in search of Bacon?
You can actually play with this subject all day long!
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This previous Contest Entry was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Hope your s male?
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Thanks,
Doctor Dicky 1024
Ah..
Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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"Where'd You Go?"
Lorena and John Bobbitt?
Pop goes the weasel to who knows where?
...
Sausage in search of Bacon?
You can actually play with this subject all day long!
...
This previous Contest Entry was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Hope your s male?
...
Thanks,
Doctor Dicky 1024
Ah..
Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for this great review,You are awesome! I'm just being silly, sometimes I can't help myself. ;)
Comment from Impromptu Scribe
Well that will certainly have the MEMBERS talking ! Very creative even if - as you admit - the contest rules were not strictly adhered to. It gives a whole new meaning to 'a stitch in time saves nine' whatever your metrics ! Congratulations on your 'tall' story ! Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Well that will certainly have the MEMBERS talking ! Very creative even if - as you admit - the contest rules were not strictly adhered to. It gives a whole new meaning to 'a stitch in time saves nine' whatever your metrics ! Congratulations on your 'tall' story ! Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it. :)
