Comment from Pearl Edwards

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A great use of the word cornerstone, Craig, as the stable foundation that, as in a building, is needed, in this case to hold the love strong.
I do like what you say in this one, very nice,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanks so much, Valda. Most appreciated :) Craig

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Quinie is such an adorable word. There simply are not enough "q" words to go around. This poem is quite profound as well. Trust is the cornerstone of any relationship. It is absolutely essential.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks very much, Debbie. I really appreciate the lovely comments. Have a great time on your trip, sure you don't need someone to carry your bags? lol :)

reply by Debbie Pope on 23-Oct-2018

Aww. I just saw this. I would have taken you in my carry on bag.

Comment from Ulla

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So true what you're saying in this wonderful poem, If trust and belief in your partner has all but gone, then all is lost. I should know, hence I just divorced the man I thought I would have spent the rest of my life with. The foundation crumbled. All the best Ulla:)) I liked the word.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

I'm so sorry to hear that, Ulla. Still, I think (based on experience) it's better in the long run to let it go than try to hang on, and make yourself more miserable. Many thanks, Craig

reply by Ulla on 14-Oct-2018

It's the best thing I've ever done. I'm so happy with my new life.:))

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with the poem and the meter, rhymes and enjambment. I do totally agree with your message. I like the metaphor of a building for the love relationship which needs to be balanced on mutual trust.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thanks very much for the kind words, Helen :) Much appreciated, Craig

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Aw this is a really nice poem, Craig. So true that important first stone if laid with precision, consistency and trust can lead to a long lasting structure.

A fine metaphor for a loving relationship. Congratulations on your book too. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018

Thanks for the kind words, Gloria; most appreciated as always. I got a shock a few minutes ago... I checked, and I've sold one more copy than I expected to :) Cheers, Craig

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Craig. Yes there is that cornerstone but, what happens when you tell your partner over and over what's wrong and nothing gets done, or it simply doesn't last. Truth in relationships isn't everything it's cracked up to be mate. Loved this one. xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Thanks so much, Deborah. Men! Can't live with them, can't chop them into little pieces and bury them in the back yard (well, you can, but it's generally frowned upon). Most grateful, Craig :)

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 12-Oct-2018

you can't??? smiles ...

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Quinie...yes I must remember this when we study letter q
I am fascinated by curious words. This is one of your best poems as I truly believe trust is the quinie cornerstone of marriage.
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Thanks very much, Jenny, for the lovely compliment. Most grateful -- Craig

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about trust between two people that is the most important element of any relationship. If the trust is broken then the two people will certainly drift apart in a short time.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

That's for sure, Sandra. Many thanks, Craig

Comment from Y. M. Roger

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I've always been fascinated by the cornerstones in the older sections of the cities and towns I visit....especially the older small towns because sometimes they write even more than the date on them. I remember one from some tour we took back in school where it said 'For Her' in smaller letters off the the bottom....but it was obviously part of the original. :) :) A fun and interesting write, sir -- thanx, as always, for sharing! :) :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

How sweet, a lasting tribute to someone special :) Many thanks for the kind words, and for sharing that anecdote, Yvette -- Craig

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

Learned a new word! Thanks. This style is very intriguing to me, and I like it.
Even with a different sort of style, the message still comes out clearly and smoothly. The picture was well chosen, as it depicts exactly what you are talking about. This poem is beautiful and practical :-)

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

Thanks very much for the lovely comments, Tina. Most grateful, Craig

reply by Tina Crute on 12-Oct-2018

Welcome!