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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Lets Move To There", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Lets Move To There", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
I liked your ...There... poem that was rollicking and fun. You described a Utopian atmosphere where all is idyllic and serene. It sounds wonderful. Thanks for giving us a smile.
Melissa
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I liked your ...There... poem that was rollicking and fun. You described a Utopian atmosphere where all is idyllic and serene. It sounds wonderful. Thanks for giving us a smile.
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from kahpot
Silly or not, I would like to move there, you have made it sound like I am there though still here yet better, (if that makes any sense) I liked this read very much, very well done****kahpot
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Silly or not, I would like to move there, you have made it sound like I am there though still here yet better, (if that makes any sense) I liked this read very much, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from Jaye Bennett
I don't know the place, either, but I enjoyed reading your fanciful poem about an unknown Utopia. Man, as a species, would never leave such a place alone. We would end up, as many immigrants have, of trying to turn into where we came from. That would be sad. Good poem. Thank you for writing it and letting me review it. I like the "Come along, come rolling, come ringing. . ."
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I don't know the place, either, but I enjoyed reading your fanciful poem about an unknown Utopia. Man, as a species, would never leave such a place alone. We would end up, as many immigrants have, of trying to turn into where we came from. That would be sad. Good poem. Thank you for writing it and letting me review it. I like the "Come along, come rolling, come ringing. . ."
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from Anntonette
I like the repetition of some specific words used such as; there, etc. Its like a chorus being repeated in different stanzas. Like lyrics being orchestrated into a poem :))
Well done!
- Anntonette J
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I like the repetition of some specific words used such as; there, etc. Its like a chorus being repeated in different stanzas. Like lyrics being orchestrated into a poem :))
Well done!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from Jim Hirtle
I didn't know if "there" was the picture accompanying this piece or a figment of someone's imagination. I thought it was a confused map not sure of where there was . I read it twice to find the humor referenced. Maybe a third time would have revealed it.
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I didn't know if "there" was the picture accompanying this piece or a figment of someone's imagination. I thought it was a confused map not sure of where there was . I read it twice to find the humor referenced. Maybe a third time would have revealed it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, Doc.
Have you ever heard the old saying, "If it is too good to be true it probably is"?
This is but one of the reasons I would abstain from moving "To There."
You see, I'm of a very...shall we say...skeptical nature.
If life seems to be rolling along without any speed bumps to impede my progress I begin to wonder.
How soon before the proverbial sh!t starts to hit the fan, and for how long.
Fun poem, though.
Keep fighting the good fight!
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Hey, Doc.
Have you ever heard the old saying, "If it is too good to be true it probably is"?
This is but one of the reasons I would abstain from moving "To There."
You see, I'm of a very...shall we say...skeptical nature.
If life seems to be rolling along without any speed bumps to impede my progress I begin to wonder.
How soon before the proverbial sh!t starts to hit the fan, and for how long.
Fun poem, though.
Keep fighting the good fight!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from LIJ Red
This calls to my rusty memory old songs like Rainbow Stew and The Big Rock Candy Mountain...people always dream of some Shangri La or Shambala where people behave like they should...
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This calls to my rusty memory old songs like Rainbow Stew and The Big Rock Candy Mountain...people always dream of some Shangri La or Shambala where people behave like they should...
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
Comment from Galactia
Hi
LOL, I'll move there. Humanity will prosper and peace and tranquility. No capital punishment, you didn't say if it is free from taxes. Lol
Great job
Regards
Tia
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Hi
LOL, I'll move there. Humanity will prosper and peace and tranquility. No capital punishment, you didn't say if it is free from taxes. Lol
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
Comment from Steaven Manalili
I like your poem because it's like a voice shouting for freedom. Let's move there and feel the victory. This is my first time to join and yet I learned so much. Congratulations and God bless!
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I like your poem because it's like a voice shouting for freedom. Let's move there and feel the victory. This is my first time to join and yet I learned so much. Congratulations and God bless!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
