God Omnipresent Does
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Very entertaining but one must ask where? Is this just a teaser that is a rub to those who think far off grass is greener? Whatever, it is an enjoyable read.
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Very entertaining but one must ask where? Is this just a teaser that is a rub to those who think far off grass is greener? Whatever, it is an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from dmt1967
I like this place where we can all live in peace. I want to move there as well. I thought the picture suited the poem and found it entertaining. Thank you for sharing and take care.
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I like this place where we can all live in peace. I want to move there as well. I thought the picture suited the poem and found it entertaining. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Josh Walters
This seems too me like you are explaining how we tend to find ourselves daydreaming about the perfect place to exist, but that might not be it. I imagined how I felt when trying to find the perfect place to live and kept realizing everywhere has its ups and its downs.
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This seems too me like you are explaining how we tend to find ourselves daydreaming about the perfect place to exist, but that might not be it. I imagined how I felt when trying to find the perfect place to live and kept realizing everywhere has its ups and its downs.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is a wonderful poem! It expresses happiness and joy! It is well written and creative! I want to move there wherever "there" is. Love and no crime-who could ask for more! :)
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This is a wonderful poem! It expresses happiness and joy! It is well written and creative! I want to move there wherever "there" is. Love and no crime-who could ask for more! :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Patty Palmer
Huh? I really enjoyed reading your poem, although I don't know because I didn't understand one sentence. LOL But I loved it. I laughed most of the way through it because I didn't know what I was supposed to be thinking! Makes me think of how sometimes when I can't think of something to write and I just start writing gibberish until one word or sentence comes from it.
Luv ya!
Patty
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Huh? I really enjoyed reading your poem, although I don't know because I didn't understand one sentence. LOL But I loved it. I laughed most of the way through it because I didn't know what I was supposed to be thinking! Makes me think of how sometimes when I can't think of something to write and I just start writing gibberish until one word or sentence comes from it.
Luv ya!
Patty
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from Bichon
I enjoyed reading this fun and lighthearted poem. I think you should do them more often, this one turned out really well and I think many people, including me will love it!
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I enjoyed reading this fun and lighthearted poem. I think you should do them more often, this one turned out really well and I think many people, including me will love it!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from Coco Jane
The ultimate utopia.
Sadly, we cannot move to there; we have build it ourselves.
I'm confused about "Free nominations not followed there."
I like "Come along, come rolling, come ringing."
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The ultimate utopia.
Sadly, we cannot move to there; we have build it ourselves.
I'm confused about "Free nominations not followed there."
I like "Come along, come rolling, come ringing."
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from Hitcher
It could be a case of, it sounds too good to be true and once you move there, there becomes a nightmare and all you then want to do is get the flock out of there : )) Or it may well be the dream there we all hope exists and can't wait to get too : ))
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It could be a case of, it sounds too good to be true and once you move there, there becomes a nightmare and all you then want to do is get the flock out of there : )) Or it may well be the dream there we all hope exists and can't wait to get too : ))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from papa55mike
I love it! You need to write silly a little more often. I do it to keep from going insane. Recently it was a poem titled "I Would" which included the line, I would climb a locust tree in a bikini. Now that's love! Great job!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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I love it! You need to write silly a little more often. I do it to keep from going insane. Recently it was a poem titled "I Would" which included the line, I would climb a locust tree in a bikini. Now that's love! Great job!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from humpwhistle
To me, 'there' sounds a lot here--minus the people who mess things up. I expect the countdown might have to do with the Rapture?
We are taught, the time is coming.
You say this is silly. Maybe.
Peace, Lee
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To me, 'there' sounds a lot here--minus the people who mess things up. I expect the countdown might have to do with the Rapture?
We are taught, the time is coming.
You say this is silly. Maybe.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
