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Let's Move To There

Read Author Notes First: A silly poem in my art & style

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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I like this free style of your own making. There is always that place where we think the world will be kinder, where our problems will disappear. A place where we will escape whatever is holding us back. Great step out of reality but still tethered to the real world. Good job on this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

Comment from joycetreasures
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Hello ALCREATOR,
I pray all is well with you. This is lovely written poem of a place I would love to live there. Peaceful and we can enjoy three seasons and three times vacations a year. That would be a blessing anywhere. I like how you formatted and wrote this calming poem. I wish it was a reality place. You showed heartfelt emotions in your message. It was such an enjoyable read. Thank you for this uplifting poem. Well-penned. Happy writing:-)

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

Comment from mvbrooks
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I'm sorry some needed author notes to enjoy the poem. When I read the title "Let's Move to There," -- this is pretty much what I expected--to read about a place we'd like to go, or dream about going, but don't always find out way to it.

Curious why the poem has the lines "let's move there" (smooth) but the title includes the word "to" -- "Let Move to There" -- for me, the title seemed awkard.

This poem reminded me of the Muppet movie song, Rainbow connection, because while the phrasing is different, the sentiment seems similar and that connection made your poem even more enjoyable to read.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

Comment from Alchera
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"Countdown begins
Enjoy three seasons and three times vacations a year
Enjoy your job occupations and professions
Or vocations or avocations
Know no scams and corruptions
Free nominations for ministerial posts are not followed there
Let's move to there"
Where could this utopian heavenly place of peace and love be where all men of goodwill will no longer be hindered by inhuman barbarism and unimaginable abominable acts? Only the island of LOVE does. Great work!


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

Comment from artisart4u
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Yes, in our minds we can move to there and treat each one as an equal.

In every stanza you think about moving to there, were there is peace and harmony.
This is not a silly poem, it is one to meditate on. I would call it written in a free verse poem style.
This is a nice inspiring, peaceful poem.

Congratulations on your wins.
Good luck with your poem.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Wryly whimsical and clever take on grass is always greener. Amusing wordplay and alliteration--rolling. ringing, singing...eligibility...disability. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

Comment from Jeffrey Ford
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I think you wrote another awesome poem. It is really well written and I enjoy your poem because there is a count down that does begin to a better place than the problems of this world. Heaven is a amazing place.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

Comment from Lucy de Welles
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All of us have a place we would like to go. A different reality. The beauty of being a powerful human is that we can do just that. This is a lovely expression of the author's confidence and longing to go to a fair and happy place. Where people choose peace and equality and focus on the needful things, like love and community. Yes, freedom is a choice. His prose unfolds like a flower, revealing the things that constitute freedom for him.
Lovely. Enjoying the free-flowing style of phrase.
Well done!

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive, clear and creative. I found
this poem thought provoking and entertaining a very special there! Most of the author's words sounded like a delightful place! The author has a great imagination! Have a great weekend!

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

Comment from DeboraDyess
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You've created a world that is perfect in this poem, Alcreator. I really like the last stanza the best. It's so upbeat and alive! I also like the repetition of the lines 'let's move to there'. It works great here!
Be blessed and safe,
Deb

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020