Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought some beautiful images to my mind here with your words Trisha and it was like a Claude Monet painting as your impressions where spot on, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018

That?s a great compliment, thank you
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written ekphrastic poem about the colorful Monet painting that cones alive when you tells about the water ballerinas in their colorful tutus dancing on the water stage.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Hi Sandra, many thanks for your usual positive review, and compliment.
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this is a wonderful dance and the colors are so vibrant. they are so nicely described in your poem. it is a joyful work and a joy to read. well done, Trisha....................meeshu

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Meeshu, your validating review is a bonus. The greatest gift for any poet surely has to be the success of imagery that meets its goal. Otherwise, words are lifeless.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sandra Piddock

Good

I love how you have interpreted this challenge. Water ballerinas in greenery, tiny boats floating. The rhyme scheme is good, although I do feel the 'community of beauty' lines are a little forced and jarring. I don't have a better suggestion, and maybe there isn't one! Overall, I really enjoyed this.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks for your very good review,
Hugs,Trisha

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks for your very good review,
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

You used a very cool rhyming style whe writing this poem. You hit on two of the four criteria that i use to rate poetry. It rhymed and it made sense. Nice job.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks for the kind review
Hugs, Trisha

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks for the kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

'We're' is a typo here.
Vivid recall about ballerinas, tutus, color of water. You have captured many thoughts about the palette of the pond and its watery ways.
Exquisite.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Thanks for the typo spotting! I appreciated your review.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by JanPerry on 22-Oct-2018

Lovely colours. Sure.

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

Have a great week

reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Typo corrected, thanks

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem is beautiful, Bucketlist. Your described the beautiful painting with equally beautiful words. Good job with the rhyme scheme and smooth flow of words. I could envision this scene even if no painting had been included. Thanks for sharing an awesome work. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

I?m glad you enjoyed reading my final piece for the club. Thank you so much for an awesome review,
.hugs, Trisha

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 22-Oct-2018

The club is on vacation. Hopefully there will be more.

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018

I hope as well