Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-Effective use of rhyme
and alliteration.
-The imagery is good and
creates a vivid picture of
the snowflakes and dogs
loving to play among them.
-Good luck in the contest.


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 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018

Thanks for all the positive comments ,Pam!

I thought it would be a fun idea to write something different about the snow besides it's white , soft and cold 😋

Thanks for the 5 star vote!

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Oct-2018

You are very welcome, and your poem was much more creative than soft, white, winter snow⛄