God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from Cedar
This is a very thought-proking Acrostic poem. It does seem to initiate thoughts about our Almighty Creator.
Using the Acrostic form of poetry allows your readers to more easily understand the message that you're trying to convey.
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This is a very thought-proking Acrostic poem. It does seem to initiate thoughts about our Almighty Creator.
Using the Acrostic form of poetry allows your readers to more easily understand the message that you're trying to convey.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from heavenempress
Beautiful piece of work and creativity at it's best. Simple and true. Keep it up. The piece flows nicely and yes indeed beautiful. Spiritual nourishing poem. I highly recommend your work to others
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Beautiful piece of work and creativity at it's best. Simple and true. Keep it up. The piece flows nicely and yes indeed beautiful. Spiritual nourishing poem. I highly recommend your work to others
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Even though I have difficulty sometimes following your flow (no fault of yours) I find purpose and meaning in the thoughts. Your deep faith and knowledge coax my own to learn and get a deeper feel for what you are saying. I shall struggle because my heart is open. Smiles, Carol
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Even though I have difficulty sometimes following your flow (no fault of yours) I find purpose and meaning in the thoughts. Your deep faith and knowledge coax my own to learn and get a deeper feel for what you are saying. I shall struggle because my heart is open. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from crzypnter
Well written with meaning and depth. I thought the picture was perfect for your poem. Faith shines through this from beginning to end. Authors notes with explanations added to this. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
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Well written with meaning and depth. I thought the picture was perfect for your poem. Faith shines through this from beginning to end. Authors notes with explanations added to this. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
Comment Written 19-May-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is an effort the Lord will shout out to the angels and may bitter men who know not God be touched by your message. Very well-written and presented...clean and straight...I like this very much...
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This is an effort the Lord will shout out to the angels and may bitter men who know not God be touched by your message. Very well-written and presented...clean and straight...I like this very much...
Comment Written 19-May-2021
Comment from C. F. Rogers
I love the execution of your theme, tone, and message used through an acrostic style! One specific thing that stuck out to me was the usage of capitalization to bring emphasis to the words you want the reader to focus on in those lines/stanzas. Beautifully written!
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I love the execution of your theme, tone, and message used through an acrostic style! One specific thing that stuck out to me was the usage of capitalization to bring emphasis to the words you want the reader to focus on in those lines/stanzas. Beautifully written!
Comment Written 19-May-2021
Comment from Wendy G
Your writing has quite a unique style. In my mind I think of an Impressionist painting. You do convey your meaning and your depth of thinking by the placing of your words and their startling combinations.
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Your writing has quite a unique style. In my mind I think of an Impressionist painting. You do convey your meaning and your depth of thinking by the placing of your words and their startling combinations.
Comment Written 19-May-2021
Comment from Iza Deleanu
These lines spoke to me:"
Get tuned, flown, rung in my heart words by words
Only I see Thy Lights upon edges of the swords
Do show my belonging to a few of Thy Infinite Words" kind of sky is the limit and from there anything is possible. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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These lines spoke to me:"
Get tuned, flown, rung in my heart words by words
Only I see Thy Lights upon edges of the swords
Do show my belonging to a few of Thy Infinite Words" kind of sky is the limit and from there anything is possible. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
Comment from irishauthorme
Starting with your illustration, I felt perfect for your acrostic content. Also appreciated your explanations of some of the terms used, knew most but not all.
Few people realize that there is a Plan to their lives, we do have choices, but the majority are controlled by God. We live in a world where more and more people are relying on earthly solutions for their problems, but when there are no choices left, they finally turn to their last resort, prayer.
My motto has always been, "When you are right wtih God, God is right with you!"
Good work,
irish
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Starting with your illustration, I felt perfect for your acrostic content. Also appreciated your explanations of some of the terms used, knew most but not all.
Few people realize that there is a Plan to their lives, we do have choices, but the majority are controlled by God. We live in a world where more and more people are relying on earthly solutions for their problems, but when there are no choices left, they finally turn to their last resort, prayer.
My motto has always been, "When you are right wtih God, God is right with you!"
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 18-May-2021
Comment from Zan Zan
I love whenever I see stuff about abba. warms my heart. You deserve every bit of your success, may abba continue to guide you forever. amen. amen.amen.
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I love whenever I see stuff about abba. warms my heart. You deserve every bit of your success, may abba continue to guide you forever. amen. amen.amen.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
