Afternoon Cocktails
Judy remembers an errand.18 total reviews
Comment from kleck140
How true it is, drinking and driving don't mix. Also a lot of other things aren't conducive to having a drink or two. My post of The Crisis relates to that. Thank you for sharing.
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How true it is, drinking and driving don't mix. Also a lot of other things aren't conducive to having a drink or two. My post of The Crisis relates to that. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
Comment from meeshu
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done but tragic, TPA.did you mean the author note you wrote? it actually makes sense the way it is. I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done but tragic, TPA.did you mean the author note you wrote? it actually makes sense the way it is. I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you I just made the story up from a prompt.
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Comment from Anntonette
This spreads the word that we should not drink and drive. It's a very dangerous thing, one of my family members lost their license because of that. If you are going to get drunk, stay home.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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This spreads the word that we should not drink and drive. It's a very dangerous thing, one of my family members lost their license because of that. If you are going to get drunk, stay home.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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I agree with you thank you for the review
Comment from Miranda Langston
ye gods. this is an incredible piece of writing but it's also incredibly dark. i have the chills almost. the six star rating is well earned. good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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ye gods. this is an incredible piece of writing but it's also incredibly dark. i have the chills almost. the six star rating is well earned. good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Bless you for that wonderful review.
Comment from Earl Corp
Interesting twist at the end. Story conveys a good messag. 150 words arent a lot to work with. Good luck in the contest. No disrespect but I hope you take second place.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Interesting twist at the end. Story conveys a good messag. 150 words arent a lot to work with. Good luck in the contest. No disrespect but I hope you take second place.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
A good use of flash fiction to remind folks how dangerous it is to drink and drive. This little tidbit seemed especially cruel because the death and the driver were linked.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~MP~
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Hi there,
A good use of flash fiction to remind folks how dangerous it is to drink and drive. This little tidbit seemed especially cruel because the death and the driver were linked.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~MP~
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from country ranch writer
WHAT A HORRIBLE ACCIDENT AND ONE SHE HAS TO LIVE WITH THE REST OF HER LIFE WHAT A SHAME NO ONE STOPPED HER FROM GETTING IN HER CAR THAT AWFUL NIGHT.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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WHAT A HORRIBLE ACCIDENT AND ONE SHE HAS TO LIVE WITH THE REST OF HER LIFE WHAT A SHAME NO ONE STOPPED HER FROM GETTING IN HER CAR THAT AWFUL NIGHT.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Thank you
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Comment from donette1914
very well done and it is so true drinking and driving don't mix
very believable and heartfelt
well chosen words you used
very nice photo
I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 5th 2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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very well done and it is so true drinking and driving don't mix
very believable and heartfelt
well chosen words you used
very nice photo
I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 5th 2018
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Thank you for your kind and wonderful words.
Comment from Loredana
Oh my God! It's terrible! I mean the piece is great, but the ending. Great job. Absolutely, amazing. If I had six stars available, I would give them to you. Wow! I'm speechless. It doesn't get any worse than this.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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Oh my God! It's terrible! I mean the piece is great, but the ending. Great job. Absolutely, amazing. If I had six stars available, I would give them to you. Wow! I'm speechless. It doesn't get any worse than this.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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You made my day. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Your words were so kind and inspiring. THANK YOU.
Comment from tfawcus
This sounds like the ultimate punishment for the crime of drink-driving. I guess that any time we let drugs or alcohol deprive us of our senses, we're asking for trouble. Often, as in this case, the consequences are life-changing.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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This sounds like the ultimate punishment for the crime of drink-driving. I guess that any time we let drugs or alcohol deprive us of our senses, we're asking for trouble. Often, as in this case, the consequences are life-changing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
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So true. Thank you for reading my story.
