Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Hold Death's Hand"Dawn of Chaos
27 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a horror poetry contest entry. It captured the horror genre well. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This should have been a horror poetry contest entry. It captured the horror genre well. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Glad certain aspects were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your warm comments and generous rate.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very creative and thoughtful poem. I thought you did a great job with this poem but the last stanza was especially powerful. I'm enjoying your poems today - keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Very creative and thoughtful poem. I thought you did a great job with this poem but the last stanza was especially powerful. I'm enjoying your poems today - keep up the great work.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Glad some aspects in this particular read were found appealing to your interests, seeking greater depths within my writes, making hopefully a more sound appeal in my works. Thanking you for your kind thoughts and generous rate.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I really like this stanza :"
Soul limited to corner howled rages sounded an enemy evil combats threat its hate cloaked stages unfolding doubt cages a thickness dark." So many metaphors and turning thoughts- hate cloaked stages, soul howled rages etc. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next poem.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I really like this stanza :"
Soul limited to corner howled rages sounded an enemy evil combats threat its hate cloaked stages unfolding doubt cages a thickness dark." So many metaphors and turning thoughts- hate cloaked stages, soul howled rages etc. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next poem.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Glad aspects in this particular read were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and kind words.
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I think the imagery in this is really strong. I had to read it a second time to fully understand it all - not a bad thing at all, as this shows depth and thought. An enjoyable poem and very thought provoking
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I think the imagery in this is really strong. I had to read it a second time to fully understand it all - not a bad thing at all, as this shows depth and thought. An enjoyable poem and very thought provoking
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I appreciate your comments about this particular read, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks.
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a very nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a very nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Glad aspects in this poem were able to touch fighting pits in my works appreciating someone who loves thought. Thanking you for your generous rate and thoughtful statement.
Comment from samandlancelot
TPAC,
What your poem meant to me is the struggle from birth throughout life and in every success, you hold death's hand. When you reach that finish line, it will take away everything you gained in life.
Just a few minor suggestions:
Heaven (heaven's) golden doors locked to you full close, found lost no moment relax a (delete 'a') to refresh
suffered no doubt you intentions (your intentions or you intend) to teach evil,
Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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TPAC,
What your poem meant to me is the struggle from birth throughout life and in every success, you hold death's hand. When you reach that finish line, it will take away everything you gained in life.
Just a few minor suggestions:
Heaven (heaven's) golden doors locked to you full close, found lost no moment relax a (delete 'a') to refresh
suffered no doubt you intentions (your intentions or you intend) to teach evil,
Patricia
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Appreciate those suggested revisions, suffering many grammar flaws in my writes, thanking you for your generous rate and uplifting comments.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chock full of powerful and fresh imagery with masterful rhyme and alliteration throughout: befall...sore/sorrow...plague/perhaps... deep plummets provide... peach to poison in itself earns your stars. And you managed to toss in a Coors (in lieu of Corona)! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Chock full of powerful and fresh imagery with masterful rhyme and alliteration throughout: befall...sore/sorrow...plague/perhaps... deep plummets provide... peach to poison in itself earns your stars. And you managed to toss in a Coors (in lieu of Corona)! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Comment from Gloria ....
What an image packed poem this is, TPAC. The staccato rush of death and sorrow creates a powerful tone to go along with the tormented soul.
An inspired artwork choice to complement this brew of chaos.
Many thanks for reviving this post.
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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What an image packed poem this is, TPAC. The staccato rush of death and sorrow creates a powerful tone to go along with the tormented soul.
An inspired artwork choice to complement this brew of chaos.
Many thanks for reviving this post.
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Glad that certain aspects were found appealing to your interests prevailing this particular write, thanking you for your generous rate and warming sentiments.
Comment from Carl DeVere
Strange vision but nonetheless compelling. For who knows, "What dreams may come--when we have shuffled off this mortal coil"--apologies to Shakespeare...but it reminded me of that.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Strange vision but nonetheless compelling. For who knows, "What dreams may come--when we have shuffled off this mortal coil"--apologies to Shakespeare...but it reminded me of that.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Glad aspects in this particular write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, TPAC,
Okay, just for the picture I have to give you five stars LoL I love horror and scheletongs. I love mexican art for day of the dead (dia de los muertos).
The poem is well written. I see you are writing a book .... A walk-in hell.
A chapter in the book Act of Endurance. Hold Death's Hand is a good addition to your book.
Well done.
gypsy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hello, TPAC,
Okay, just for the picture I have to give you five stars LoL I love horror and scheletongs. I love mexican art for day of the dead (dia de los muertos).
The poem is well written. I see you are writing a book .... A walk-in hell.
A chapter in the book Act of Endurance. Hold Death's Hand is a good addition to your book.
Well done.
gypsy
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Good shout. The picture is very captivating, hoping my tib bit aids its thought. Thanking you for your generous rate and appreciated viewpoint.
