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Viewing comments for Chapter 268 "My return to theism"
A collection of poems showcasing unusual words

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Comment from Debbie Pope
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This was a delightful post, Craig. Your godmother would be so proud. Actually, I think it as incredible as you that theism relates to tea as well as a God. Fascinating. I need to reread some of your religious posts to get a good handle on your beliefs. I remember they are fascinating as well.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
    Oh, they're fairly simple, Debbie... you could even say non-existent. That's why a couple of people found it funny -- I was kind of leading them up the garden path, a bit of a tease. I actually find the idea of godparents bizarre, but mine was extremely kind to me as a child, and I have very fond memories of her. Many thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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So... my mother reading tea leaves isn't quite the same... (and is a complete non sequitur but who cares? It was fun to share. *grin*) Besides, I have to fill up this review box with something, and I've decided I want to do that with little tidbits of unrelated fact or fancy that I fancy. LOL!!!!!!! (I'm sick of offering the same words over and over. I probably shouldn't even be reviewing right now, at least for those who seldom give a reviewer ANYTHING to work with! MESS UP. lol!)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
    Your mother read tea leaves? (Hasty retreat to delete a few poems...)

    Thanks so much for the lovely sparkly things, and the fun comments, Dawn :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Haha ... this was a fun poem, Craig! Who would have thought that being "theic" would mean loving tea. It sounds more like a type of religion. :)

I love a cup of tea in the late afternoon, but first thing in the morning it's gotta be strong coffee to wake me up.

I love how for the first two-thirds of your poem you have your reader wondering what "theic" is, and you put some fun into it. "I'll drown in antioxidants 'til I'm so fit and well" ... great line!

Great rhyming, smooth flowing, clever and fun ... this poem's a winner! I enjoyed reading your author notes as well. Now, please pour me a cup of "hibiscus" tea.

Cheers,
Connie

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
    I enjoyed that line too, Connie. Thanks for sharing that with me :)

    I'm most grateful for the lovely comments and the bright, shiny stars.

    One hibiscus tea, coming up!

    Craig
Comment from Gloria ....
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Well, if I wasn't reading it for myself, Craig I just would not believe it. But you said it, you are now a theist or is that theic.

Terrific poem about an important subject, because tea-drinking is important, ya know.:)

Great job and a fun read,

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
    It is a deadly serious topic, Gloria. And tea must always be stirred anticlockwise (or is that counterclockwise? I'm never sure, being neighboUrs and all, how much you've been corrupted by those people south of the border).

    Thanks for a fun review :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, you're such a big tease, Craig! I enjoyed your poem as well as your humorous and entertaining notes. It's confusing when the Latin root and Greek root point to different meanings completely! Here's to tea - decaf, please!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
    Decaf, Helen? What WOULD be the point? lol Thanks for reviewing :)

reply by lyenochka on 25-Sep-2018
    Lol. I know. It's sad because decaf green lacks so much flavor. I am just too sensitive to caffeine. Sadness.
Comment from BeasPeas
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I enjoyed your poem on theism. I do like tea, too. But, puleese, allow me my coffee. I'd be lost without it. Who knew that "theism" was a love of tea? Yes, I'm sure you surprised your readers with this one. Marilyn

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn. I was quite tickled to see there was another definition :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I like this poem! I am a tea drinker, too. Good job, Craig. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes. I like flavored hot teas and good ice tea. We have a restaurant here that makes great ice tea--wish I had a hose form there to my house just for tea. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    My other half has just got me on to iced tea infusions, Jan. Tea bags you just drop into cold water. Currently I have two varieties - watermelon, strawberry and mint; and passionfruit, mango and blood orange. The great thing is, I can get three tall glasses from one bag. So for the first time ever, I'm actually drinking my recommended amount of water each day :) Thanks for the fine comments.
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 24-Sep-2018
    Have you made Sun Tea? The watermelon, strawberry, mint sounds awesome!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    No, I haven't heard of sun tea. What is it?
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 24-Sep-2018
    You put several tea bags in a container that can be covered. Then add water. Then set in the sun for several hours and the heat brews the tea. I had a neighbor who made this in a 2 quart glass pitcher with lid. He put this out on his cement fence every morning and had tea by noon or later. I think you can use as many bags as desired--he didn't use that many, and nothing ever bothered it on the fence. Here in the states we have cold water tea bags--just add the bags to water in a pitcher and it brews sitting on the counter--doesn't take that long either. I like strong tea and even stronger hot tea.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    Sounds like a fun idea to try some time. If I do, I'll let you know how it turns out :)
Comment from Scarbrems
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Ha Ha Ha, you had me going then, I thought I'd lost you to the dark side ... This was a great bit of fun. I, too am revisiting tea in the evenings, but coffee is still my favourite. Another great write from the 'good book'.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    LOL it will be a cold day in a non-existent hell before that happens, Emma. But I thought it would be fun to scare a few people ;-) Thanks so much for dropping by, and the kind comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem. To have a cup of tea is always welcome while working on something. It opens the mind and relaxes the nerves. I suppose I am a theist too.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    I suppose you are, Sandra! Many thanks :) Craig
Comment from tfawcus
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You certainly had me going with this one! Skilful use of the double meaning to make a most original and entertaining poem. One of your best in this series of curiosities.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    Thanks so much, Tony. I really appreciate the lovely comments, and wonderful rating. I can't objectively judge if it's among the best, but it's unquestionably the one that was most fun to write :)

    Most grateful -- Craig