Dare I Share These
50 Word Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Ha. This tongue-in-cheek ribbing was well taken by this reader who doesn't always write of happy endings-haha. Great idea. Best of luck with your entry.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
Ha. This tongue-in-cheek ribbing was well taken by this reader who doesn't always write of happy endings-haha. Great idea. Best of luck with your entry.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Lol, yeah, write something that doesn't have a pretty, happy outcome and you can bet it won't do good in 'these' booths, that's for sure. Thank you for the great review, FB. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from jenintorre
You missed out slushy, yucky love poems. I love this and I so agree with you. I can't wait to see who has written this masterpeice.
Lots of luck in the flash fiction contest. Rock on. Jen.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
You missed out slushy, yucky love poems. I love this and I so agree with you. I can't wait to see who has written this masterpeice.
Lots of luck in the flash fiction contest. Rock on. Jen.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Lol, yeah, I wanted to add love in there as well but the list was already fairly long with just the 3. Haha. Thank you for the great review, Jen. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my silly little piece. Have a great day.
Comment from LyndaS
Jeepers, poet, you do an excellent job of grabbing the reader and taking her on a magic carpet ride only to have the carburetor blow and consequently do a swan dive onto the pavement. This was funny as hell and the payoff was sweet. You write very well for a sarcastic soul. Good luck in this contest. I loved this!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
Jeepers, poet, you do an excellent job of grabbing the reader and taking her on a magic carpet ride only to have the carburetor blow and consequently do a swan dive onto the pavement. This was funny as hell and the payoff was sweet. You write very well for a sarcastic soul. Good luck in this contest. I loved this!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Lynda. Yeah, I usually blow a lot of carburetors on here, lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well gardens, pets or alzheimer's is not a bad start, but I think you'll find that there is a much wider audience on here, go on share your unimaginable tales of heroism and adventures, we all love a brave story, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
Well gardens, pets or alzheimer's is not a bad start, but I think you'll find that there is a much wider audience on here, go on share your unimaginable tales of heroism and adventures, we all love a brave story, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Man, you forgot the puppies... never forget the puppies. They win all the time... oh, and the cats too... or another mundane story about a woman doing absolutely nothing of interest...
In the vastness of a writer's imagination, boxes are the enemy of creativity...
I liked this piece. It has a very lyrical and poetic nature to it.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
Hi there,
Man, you forgot the puppies... never forget the puppies. They win all the time... oh, and the cats too... or another mundane story about a woman doing absolutely nothing of interest...
In the vastness of a writer's imagination, boxes are the enemy of creativity...
I liked this piece. It has a very lyrical and poetic nature to it.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Haha, yes, how dumb of me...puppies, of course. I might have to trade one of my words off for 'pets.' Thank you for the great review, GMG. I really appreciate the generous stars. I didn't think I was even going to get one review, lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.