Falling in love#2
a 3 line poem-5-7-530 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is so true. True love binds two people together so that one can't they can seem to be apart without seeming like a piece of them is missing. Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing
joan
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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This is so true. True love binds two people together so that one can't they can seem to be apart without seeming like a piece of them is missing. Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing
joan
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much and sorry for the late reply
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You are most kindly welcome. No apologies necessary.
Joan
Comment from tbacha58
Sorry i am out of six stars, next week i will be here. I loved it the way you could put together a story of love in 3 phrases, it came out so deep and strong. You deserve the All Time Best. Bravo. Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Sorry i am out of six stars, next week i will be here. I loved it the way you could put together a story of love in 3 phrases, it came out so deep and strong. You deserve the All Time Best. Bravo. Terry xoxo
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, stars are not important it is encouragement such as this I welcome****kahpot
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO KAHPOT: I agree with you here. I've imagined that true love is found where a man is joined to his wife...and they become one flesh. When I was a kid we used to play this mathematical equation: One could find it scribbled all over everywhere. Yes... By us kids.
2 people.
2 gether.
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4 ever.
I grew up in that.
That grew up in me.
So as far as I'm concerned...your poem here comes right exact. God bless you, Kahpot. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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HELLO KAHPOT: I agree with you here. I've imagined that true love is found where a man is joined to his wife...and they become one flesh. When I was a kid we used to play this mathematical equation: One could find it scribbled all over everywhere. Yes... By us kids.
2 people.
2 gether.
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4 ever.
I grew up in that.
That grew up in me.
So as far as I'm concerned...your poem here comes right exact. God bless you, Kahpot. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much and what a wonderful equation, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from JanPerry
As one of the best on here, you have again kept it short but sweet. My favourite. Having not had true love, I wouldn't know what it feels like to be bound with one person. Not from lack of trying. Keeping the message short is a blessing, I just wish everyone did that.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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As one of the best on here, you have again kept it short but sweet. My favourite. Having not had true love, I wouldn't know what it feels like to be bound with one person. Not from lack of trying. Keeping the message short is a blessing, I just wish everyone did that.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, and I hope you find your true love****kahpot
Comment from Linda Norris
This is quite sweet. There is an awfully lot one could say about falling in love; but, this basically sums it up pretty well. It's definitely nice to remember and think about when we fell in love and enjoy the hope it brings.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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This is quite sweet. There is an awfully lot one could say about falling in love; but, this basically sums it up pretty well. It's definitely nice to remember and think about when we fell in love and enjoy the hope it brings.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
This is lovely. It is romantic and makes me tingle. I love your last line "beating one sound". It shows the joining of two in love. You did well creating a short poem that has a theme that comes through clearly.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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This is lovely. It is romantic and makes me tingle. I love your last line "beating one sound". It shows the joining of two in love. You did well creating a short poem that has a theme that comes through clearly.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good syllable count, Kahpot.
-Effective use of rhyme.
-A good love poem for the contest.
-I like the idea of the two hearts
"beating just one sound."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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-Good syllable count, Kahpot.
-Effective use of rhyme.
-A good love poem for the contest.
-I like the idea of the two hearts
"beating just one sound."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, I love your input and understanding****kahpot
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Urial
Hi Kahpot,
This is a lovely Haiku poem that captures true love. They usually don't rhyme, this is terrific for the whole hearts beat in step.
Peace be with you,
Urial
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Hi Kahpot,
This is a lovely Haiku poem that captures true love. They usually don't rhyme, this is terrific for the whole hearts beat in step.
Peace be with you,
Urial
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much this is a wonderful and encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Falling in love", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Between each line of this talented poet's work are woven the golden threads of truth. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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"Falling in love", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Between each line of this talented poet's work are woven the golden threads of truth. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much, much appreciated****kahpot
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*****kahpot, as always, you're very welcome.
Take care and God bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from Carlie Beth
This is a beautifully written 5-7-5 poem about love. It's amazing how you were able to capture a very deep heartfelt feeling with few words. Wonderful job!! Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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This is a beautifully written 5-7-5 poem about love. It's amazing how you were able to capture a very deep heartfelt feeling with few words. Wonderful job!! Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot
