Save the Union
A Cinquain5 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
Hi there
I really enjoyed this little cinquain poem. Your few words are to the point and so true. Great artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
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Hi there
I really enjoyed this little cinquain poem. Your few words are to the point and so true. Great artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey, Kamran, great to see you back again. I hope everything is going well with you.
LOL, I get quite a charge out of your artwork, kissing butts seems to be in vogue these days.
A excellent Cinquain with a fine social commentary. Yes, time to wake up and smell the coffee.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Hey, Kamran, great to see you back again. I hope everything is going well with you.
LOL, I get quite a charge out of your artwork, kissing butts seems to be in vogue these days.
A excellent Cinquain with a fine social commentary. Yes, time to wake up and smell the coffee.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
Comment from Joan E.
I am at a family reunion in Vacaville, Northern California, and I was delighted to see your name pop up. I hope all is well and we'll be seeing more of your work as well.
I admired your cinquain, which expressed my sentiments about politics. I always like your attention to a substantive title, which writers often forget to address. Cheers- Joan
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I am at a family reunion in Vacaville, Northern California, and I was delighted to see your name pop up. I hope all is well and we'll be seeing more of your work as well.
I admired your cinquain, which expressed my sentiments about politics. I always like your attention to a substantive title, which writers often forget to address. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Kamran. Welcome back. I think we need to disallow campaign contributions from pacs and other special interest groups. Overturn citizens united and eliminate lobbyists and most of the corruption goes away. Let those business executives contribute out of their own pockets. Our political system is all about bribery and blackmail which in and of themselves are inherently corrupt. Nice entry for the contest. Thank you for sharing
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Hi Kamran. Welcome back. I think we need to disallow campaign contributions from pacs and other special interest groups. Overturn citizens united and eliminate lobbyists and most of the corruption goes away. Let those business executives contribute out of their own pockets. Our political system is all about bribery and blackmail which in and of themselves are inherently corrupt. Nice entry for the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
Comment from Adri7enne
A Cinquain. I'm not familiar with the term but I would imagine it means there should be 5 lines, which this poem has. And the theme is pretty straightforward. Let's forget our differences and join together for the benefit of the entire country. Lovely idea, ameen. Good luck in the contest.
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A Cinquain. I'm not familiar with the term but I would imagine it means there should be 5 lines, which this poem has. And the theme is pretty straightforward. Let's forget our differences and join together for the benefit of the entire country. Lovely idea, ameen. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
