A Perfect Lunch
Honoring: Jan Shepards' (see notes) loving work...66 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! What a story and what a tangled web some people weave in life and fall to unfortunate events, there but for the grace of God eh? And yet you saw the light and gave and you are a Godly soul, these poor people fell on the wrong side of the tracks and it's people like you we are all grateful for, a sad story with light at the end of the tunnel, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Wow! What a story and what a tangled web some people weave in life and fall to unfortunate events, there but for the grace of God eh? And yet you saw the light and gave and you are a Godly soul, these poor people fell on the wrong side of the tracks and it's people like you we are all grateful for, a sad story with light at the end of the tunnel, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much Dolly... I always love and look forward to your reviews.yours, diana
Comment from heart of Lou
I had goosebumps while reading your story. You really should write a book about this. It would inspire others to do the same, as it already inspired me. I live in the country and hardly ever see any homeless, but when I travel to the city and see the homeless sleeping on the sidewalks, my heart breaks.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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I had goosebumps while reading your story. You really should write a book about this. It would inspire others to do the same, as it already inspired me. I live in the country and hardly ever see any homeless, but when I travel to the city and see the homeless sleeping on the sidewalks, my heart breaks.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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That is so great... goosebumps are an indicator of where our heart is and your heart was in compassion... keep it up. thanks again. yours, diana
Comment from Air Spirit
What a lovely and moving poem.. and how awesome it is that you have gotten to know these individuals as 'people' rather than just a nameless face..God bless you for your kindness and compassion..and thank God that your compassion, kindness & loving heart, becomes blessings to everyone involved.. it makes me think if Dionne Warwick's classic song, "What the world needs now is love sweet love, No, not just for some but for everyone...,". Love begets love, and compassion promotes understanding.. with every loving gesture or kindness, it gets society one step closer to a global rebirth.. thank you for making a difference and for personalizing homelessness by introducing us to your friends.. Blessed Be..
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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What a lovely and moving poem.. and how awesome it is that you have gotten to know these individuals as 'people' rather than just a nameless face..God bless you for your kindness and compassion..and thank God that your compassion, kindness & loving heart, becomes blessings to everyone involved.. it makes me think if Dionne Warwick's classic song, "What the world needs now is love sweet love, No, not just for some but for everyone...,". Love begets love, and compassion promotes understanding.. with every loving gesture or kindness, it gets society one step closer to a global rebirth.. thank you for making a difference and for personalizing homelessness by introducing us to your friends.. Blessed Be..
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Hey Air Spirit... always a pleasure to find you in my corner. I love that song and the next step is putting the words into true action... again thanksx yours diana
Comment from LaFrance
Your poem is a great entry to the rhyming contest. It was an amazing read, your detailed description of its inspiration is very interesting. I myself, when I was in college, experienced a similar encounter with homeless individuals who left a heart-warming memory.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Your poem is a great entry to the rhyming contest. It was an amazing read, your detailed description of its inspiration is very interesting. I myself, when I was in college, experienced a similar encounter with homeless individuals who left a heart-warming memory.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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hey LaFrance... for your thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from Nanny 6
What a testimony your poem and story tells. Wow, what a blessing you are giving and receiving by committing to this endeavor. Very rewarding for you, I'm sure.
: ) Judy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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What a testimony your poem and story tells. Wow, what a blessing you are giving and receiving by committing to this endeavor. Very rewarding for you, I'm sure.
: ) Judy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Hey Nanny...the rewards are all mine trust me. yours, diana
Comment from mermaids
I love the verse about the homeless man reciting poetry for money. It makes the reader see the homeless is different light. I always felt the homeless should be treated with respect and dignity. Your notes about Jan Shepherd's work is moving and shows what one individual can do.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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I love the verse about the homeless man reciting poetry for money. It makes the reader see the homeless is different light. I always felt the homeless should be treated with respect and dignity. Your notes about Jan Shepherd's work is moving and shows what one individual can do.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Hey mermaids... thanks so much for your thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem tells a good story of running away from a homeless man to help another one. It and your notes tell how helping someone can change both people involved.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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This poem tells a good story of running away from a homeless man to help another one. It and your notes tell how helping someone can change both people involved.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Hey dragon... thanks for your thoughtful review. di
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Many people create selective blindness, not processing the sight of homeless. Most don't give others a second thought. Sharing these insights both oi your poem and author notes might awaken some. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Many people create selective blindness, not processing the sight of homeless. Most don't give others a second thought. Sharing these insights both oi your poem and author notes might awaken some. Good job.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Selective blindness sad but true... why is it we have so little compassion for others. thanks for your stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is the best gift I have received in a long time. I read the Author's notes first, and I'm glad I did. What a big heart, this Jan Shepherd, has. To me, the point is, you don't have to be spiritual to help the homeless. The stories you wrote, about the people that Jan met, melted my heart. I have known that homeless people have humanity like everyone else. Sometimes their hearts are so big because they have experienced life's hardships. It takes struggle to build character. I have worked with mentally challenged people for several years, back when I was younger. And, I have taken away a great deal of respect for them, and what they face, every day of their lives. My mother was Bipolar. It affected me profoundly in many ways, but most importantly I learned to listen to her and her troubles. My heart grew with every time, I put myself in hers, or someone else's, shoes. Anyway, I loved your rhyming poem. The message is wonderful, and it tells a great story. The flow and rhymes are excellent. I particularly like the last two rhymes, "Sahweet" and "street." Very clever, indeed. Your humanity is busting over with goodness and light. And, I am glad I have shared this experience with you. I hope a lot of readers read this, from beginning to end.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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This is the best gift I have received in a long time. I read the Author's notes first, and I'm glad I did. What a big heart, this Jan Shepherd, has. To me, the point is, you don't have to be spiritual to help the homeless. The stories you wrote, about the people that Jan met, melted my heart. I have known that homeless people have humanity like everyone else. Sometimes their hearts are so big because they have experienced life's hardships. It takes struggle to build character. I have worked with mentally challenged people for several years, back when I was younger. And, I have taken away a great deal of respect for them, and what they face, every day of their lives. My mother was Bipolar. It affected me profoundly in many ways, but most importantly I learned to listen to her and her troubles. My heart grew with every time, I put myself in hers, or someone else's, shoes. Anyway, I loved your rhyming poem. The message is wonderful, and it tells a great story. The flow and rhymes are excellent. I particularly like the last two rhymes, "Sahweet" and "street." Very clever, indeed. Your humanity is busting over with goodness and light. And, I am glad I have shared this experience with you. I hope a lot of readers read this, from beginning to end.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Hey sweet Jesse... Everything you say here is so accurate and very much appreciated... I love your review and look forward. Thanks so much and double thanks for your stellar/plus-one review. Looking Forward Jesse. Yours, diana
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Hi Diana
I see that my wish came true. You had scads of reviews, and that is a pleasure to see. You are affecting readers everywhere. Keep looking forward. Never backward.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from royowen
Well done Diana, for your compassion and bravery. The homeless are not who they seem, I had a conversation with a man who spent a lot of his time living under a tree, in his former life he was an accountant, who'd had a breakup with his wife and children, (I think,,it was a long time ago) but had opted to live away from society, he was perfectly articulate and knew what he was doing. I realised that all of us are only what we are, I try no to judge anyone, everybody is precious to God. Beautifully written Diana, should have entered the prose in a contest, excellent work, done, blessings, Roi
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Well done Diana, for your compassion and bravery. The homeless are not who they seem, I had a conversation with a man who spent a lot of his time living under a tree, in his former life he was an accountant, who'd had a breakup with his wife and children, (I think,,it was a long time ago) but had opted to live away from society, he was perfectly articulate and knew what he was doing. I realised that all of us are only what we are, I try no to judge anyone, everybody is precious to God. Beautifully written Diana, should have entered the prose in a contest, excellent work, done, blessings, Roi
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Hey Roy... thanks kiddo always grateful for your review today. I always love your reviews and am grateful
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Most welcome Diana
