The Wind
an essence poem16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This essence poem, The Wind, has both the internal and end rhyme, and six-syllables-per-line requirements. Any other day I would get into the freedom aspect of wind. Today I watch the East Coast blown level. The wind is an awesome thing.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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This essence poem, The Wind, has both the internal and end rhyme, and six-syllables-per-line requirements. Any other day I would get into the freedom aspect of wind. Today I watch the East Coast blown level. The wind is an awesome thing.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Guess it was bad timing for this particular poem but I do thank you for the comments and the rating.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is just what wind does and can cause some mayhem along the way too, as you say it has a will of its own, often high winds can cause much destruction, lvoe Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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That is just what wind does and can cause some mayhem along the way too, as you say it has a will of its own, often high winds can cause much destruction, lvoe Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you. I am grateful for the rating as well as the comments.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Beautifully written and true words about the wind. The Bible says and I paraphrase it and say that the wind blows where it may. And although you cant see the wind but you can see the signs of where its been. This is what this poem reminds me of.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Beautifully written and true words about the wind. The Bible says and I paraphrase it and say that the wind blows where it may. And although you cant see the wind but you can see the signs of where its been. This is what this poem reminds me of.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Good, the Bible is from where the first line was taken. I also want to thank you for the excellent rating and the lovely comments.
Comment from poesyapprentice
The picture you included was beautiful and the gray clouds in it aided the imagery of the poem. The write followed the rules of the prompt and form. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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The picture you included was beautiful and the gray clouds in it aided the imagery of the poem. The write followed the rules of the prompt and form. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much. Both the rating and comments are much appreciated.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Neonewman
What a great entry this is for the essence poetry prompt. Brilliantly crafted with simplicity. Love the wind, when its gentle. Love the fall as well.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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What a great entry this is for the essence poetry prompt. Brilliantly crafted with simplicity. Love the wind, when its gentle. Love the fall as well.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Both the rating and comments are much appreciated. Thanks.
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My pleasure
Comment from William Ross
yes, very good on the essence poem has what it needs and fits the contest. And yes the wind will blow where it wants to go. good luck on this and have a great day.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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yes, very good on the essence poem has what it needs and fits the contest. And yes the wind will blow where it wants to go. good luck on this and have a great day.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for the rating, comments and well wishes. Hope you have a great day as well.
Comment from June Sargent
Very good example of a septolet- flowed nicely and made sense! And it's so true - the wind will blow wherever it wants to. So hang onto your hats! Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Very good example of a septolet- flowed nicely and made sense! And it's so true - the wind will blow wherever it wants to. So hang onto your hats! Well done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you. Thank you so much. I am most grateful for the rating and your comments.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very well written and presented, Anonymous Author. Especially as this is the very first time you've ever written in the Essence Poem format.
I could almost hear the wind whispering through the trees.
Bravo and good luck!
~Dean
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Very well written and presented, Anonymous Author. Especially as this is the very first time you've ever written in the Essence Poem format.
I could almost hear the wind whispering through the trees.
Bravo and good luck!
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thanks so very much. Really appreciate the rating and the comments.
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My pleasure. :)
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Thank you. Most appreciated.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You have met the requirements
for the contest.
-I like the second line the way you have it.
-I like your topic choice and
imagery about the wind.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You have met the requirements
for the contest.
-I like the second line the way you have it.
-I like your topic choice and
imagery about the wind.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thank you. I have to admit that I altered the second line slightly at the advice of another viewer so it's been improved.
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You are welcome. You made a good choice by using "o'er."
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written essence poem. No one are able to stop the wind when it blows over the fields, it blows as fast as it can and wherever it wants to go when it comes over the hill.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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A very well-written essence poem. No one are able to stop the wind when it blows over the fields, it blows as fast as it can and wherever it wants to go when it comes over the hill.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thank you. I am both deeply humbled and honored at the rating and the comments.
