Constancy!
Creates Clarity...29 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four-line poem about finding the truth and place all our trust in what we believe then we will have the victory when the time comes for us to claim the prize.
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A very well-written four-line poem about finding the truth and place all our trust in what we believe then we will have the victory when the time comes for us to claim the prize.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
Comment from estory
Loved all the 't' sounds tacking this together, tacking together the elements of trust, time, truth. Nice job in a small space to create something with some great musical elements. estory
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Loved all the 't' sounds tacking this together, tacking together the elements of trust, time, truth. Nice job in a small space to create something with some great musical elements. estory
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much estory... always a pleasure. yours, diana
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
Love the message within this one. Truth breeds trust, and that's no lie! You will only be trusted if you tell the truth. It's a bit of a tongue twister but very well said. Good luck for the contest. Nice little poem with alliteration that sounds really nice when read aloud- 'tangible, tried and tethered'
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Love the message within this one. Truth breeds trust, and that's no lie! You will only be trusted if you tell the truth. It's a bit of a tongue twister but very well said. Good luck for the contest. Nice little poem with alliteration that sounds really nice when read aloud- 'tangible, tried and tethered'
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Hayley... Thanks kiddo... always a pleasure. yours, diana
Comment from Just2Write
Excellent use of T throughout this 4 line poem. That's not easy to do, but you pull it off well here. The message is sound too and gives us much to think about. I don't think you need a Capital letter at the beginning of each line, though. It makes the reader think that it is a new sentence.
This is also an excellent submission to this contest and I wish you well.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Excellent use of T throughout this 4 line poem. That's not easy to do, but you pull it off well here. The message is sound too and gives us much to think about. I don't think you need a Capital letter at the beginning of each line, though. It makes the reader think that it is a new sentence.
This is also an excellent submission to this contest and I wish you well.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Again honored by your review. yours, diana
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Comment from zlp22
Good short poem with perfect picture. Many times truth cannot be found. Good luck in the contest. Trust in many ways better than what the truth may be.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Good short poem with perfect picture. Many times truth cannot be found. Good luck in the contest. Trust in many ways better than what the truth may be.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Zip... thanks so much for stopping by and your thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from Ogden
Yes, you are an excellent exponent for the true value of genuine truth, as evidenced by your inspired thinking.
Wishing your four-liner the best of luck in the contest,
Don
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Yes, you are an excellent exponent for the true value of genuine truth, as evidenced by your inspired thinking.
Wishing your four-liner the best of luck in the contest,
Don
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Ogden... long time... great to see you... yours, d dana
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Same here, Diana (or is it now 'D Dana'?).
Don
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It is both Ogden... I come when I
m called ... di/Diana
Comment from rama devi
I enjoyed this contemplative and alliterated musing on trust and truth. There is a symbiotic relationship between the two. Truth manifests through trust and vice versa. Love the closing AHA:
Tangible, tried and tethered in time
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I enjoyed this contemplative and alliterated musing on trust and truth. There is a symbiotic relationship between the two. Truth manifests through trust and vice versa. Love the closing AHA:
Tangible, tried and tethered in time
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hello Again Rama... thanks so much for your wonderful words and review. yours, diana
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Comment from Joan E.
I admired your abundant use of alliteration and your message. I liked the equation in the endless shore picture as well. Best wishes in the Four Line Poem competition- Joan
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I admired your abundant use of alliteration and your message. I liked the equation in the endless shore picture as well. Best wishes in the Four Line Poem competition- Joan
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
Comment from donette1914
this is so well written in just a few words about the truth.
a wonderful photo
a very good choice of words for the contest
I hope for the best
it was a pleasure
donette1914 Sep 8 2018
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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this is so well written in just a few words about the truth.
a wonderful photo
a very good choice of words for the contest
I hope for the best
it was a pleasure
donette1914 Sep 8 2018
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thanks again so much Donnette... yours, diana
