Constancy!
Creates Clarity...29 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Very wise sentiments. It does take time to build trust. And it should be based on truth. Tried and true. Once broken it can't always be fixed. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Very wise sentiments. It does take time to build trust. And it should be based on truth. Tried and true. Once broken it can't always be fixed. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey June... Truth a very illusive concept sometimes. yours, diana
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is very nice. I love the alliteration throughout the short, but to the point, poem.
I read it out loud, and it rolls off the tongue so well. My favorite line is the last one, "tangible, tried and tethered in time." Both 'truth' and 'trust' fit that scenario excellently. Very good use of the Four Line Poem. You say it all, and then some! I enjoyed reading this piece.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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This is very nice. I love the alliteration throughout the short, but to the point, poem.
I read it out loud, and it rolls off the tongue so well. My favorite line is the last one, "tangible, tried and tethered in time." Both 'truth' and 'trust' fit that scenario excellently. Very good use of the Four Line Poem. You say it all, and then some! I enjoyed reading this piece.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Jesse... I was on a time tangent for some reason that day... go figures... you are such a joy. yours, diana
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I like the phrase, "time tangent." It's very alliterative, just like your poem was. I enjoy reading your poetry.
Jesse
Comment from judiverse
Beautifully written and presented. Your use of alliteration is impressive and all the words are effectively used. Trust is something we rely on, and we hope people live up to our trust. Excellent words to make your point--tangible, tried, and tethered in time. It may take time to build up trust. Your syllable count is right on for the contest, and best of luck. judi
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Beautifully written and presented. Your use of alliteration is impressive and all the words are effectively used. Trust is something we rely on, and we hope people live up to our trust. Excellent words to make your point--tangible, tried, and tethered in time. It may take time to build up trust. Your syllable count is right on for the contest, and best of luck. judi
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Judi... Trust is often illusive unfortunately... Thanks for another thoughtful review... yours always are. yours, diana
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You're welcome. children are always so trusting, and then they learn that some people can't be trusted. judi
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Wisdom from heaven, depth of the human heart that is seeking truth and finds it. This is an exceptional poem of grace and healing. "Trust is the true test" -- a most valuable lesson to learn here ...or hereafter.
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Wisdom from heaven, depth of the human heart that is seeking truth and finds it. This is an exceptional poem of grace and healing. "Trust is the true test" -- a most valuable lesson to learn here ...or hereafter.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hello Donka... I love your name! Thanks for your incredible thoughts and a 6. I'm honored and humbled by your words... speechless really. yours, diana
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You are welcome, Diana
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your words and without that trust there is no truth especially between lovers, your words are wise and resonating, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I so agree with your words and without that trust there is no truth especially between lovers, your words are wise and resonating, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Dolly thanks so much... di
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Diana. I have missed you! How the hell are you. This is a good entry for the contest. Nice poem. I have some comments below. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Here. Put a space between tangible, and tried. Also I think it should be "tethered to". Tether means to tie a rope to an animal.
"tangible,tried and tethered in time"
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hi Diana. I have missed you! How the hell are you. This is a good entry for the contest. Nice poem. I have some comments below. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Here. Put a space between tangible, and tried. Also I think it should be "tethered to". Tether means to tie a rope to an animal.
"tangible,tried and tethered in time"
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Pam... always my angel... sending love. diana
Comment from Boogienights
Also the basis for a long lasting relationship. Trust and honesty is key to staying together as your short poem says in very few words. A lovely picture you choose, it made me feel peaceful. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Also the basis for a long lasting relationship. Trust and honesty is key to staying together as your short poem says in very few words. A lovely picture you choose, it made me feel peaceful. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Say Amen! Boogie thanks for your thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from Mastery
I'm guessing you formulated this one too, Di Your four liner is a good exercise in alliteration, my friend.
"tangible,tried and tethered in time"
Good job, Di. Bob
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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I'm guessing you formulated this one too, Di Your four liner is a good exercise in alliteration, my friend.
"tangible,tried and tethered in time"
Good job, Di. Bob
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Hey Kiddo... I did and I thank you so much for reading and as ever just stopping by... yours, diana
Comment from country ranch writer
Trust must be earned and not taken lightly! So many people wish they had listened and ruined their lives because people lost trust in them.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Trust must be earned and not taken lightly! So many people wish they had listened and ruined their lives because people lost trust in them.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Say Amen country ranch writer... humbled. yours, diana
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow. This is a really deep write for only four lines, Diana. :) So very solid are the phrases ... the foundation of any relationship or of any solid character of a person. And I think the BEST part of the whole piece is 'tethered in time' ... that seals the deal for me. Definitely. :) ;)
Thank you for sharing those wonderful words and best wishes for the contest! :) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Wow. This is a really deep write for only four lines, Diana. :) So very solid are the phrases ... the foundation of any relationship or of any solid character of a person. And I think the BEST part of the whole piece is 'tethered in time' ... that seals the deal for me. Definitely. :) ;)
Thank you for sharing those wonderful words and best wishes for the contest! :) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Again another very thoughtful and thought provoking review... This made me smile and not sidewards... straight up... thanks diana
