Expensive Taste
What Am I Contest Entry9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This What Am I? question, Expensive Tastes, written in a 5-7-5 format, demonstrates that nothing exceeds like excess, even in the realms of antiquity.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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This What Am I? question, Expensive Tastes, written in a 5-7-5 format, demonstrates that nothing exceeds like excess, even in the realms of antiquity.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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Appreciate very much your stopping by to read and offer insights, Bill.
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is a very creative poem. I had never heard that story about Cleopatra, so I had no idea what you were describing.
Best of luck to you in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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This is a very creative poem. I had never heard that story about Cleopatra, so I had no idea what you were describing.
Best of luck to you in the contest
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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Glad you could drop by to read and review. It's much appreciated.
Comment from Kelly Hanna
I loved the whole thing! The supporting facts that you provided gave me an even better feel o the story. The photo was beautiful as well. Good job!........................
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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I loved the whole thing! The supporting facts that you provided gave me an even better feel o the story. The photo was beautiful as well. Good job!........................
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to share your insights on Cleopatras pearl!
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is an awesome entry. I could not guess the answer, and I loved the Cleopatra story. One of the reasons that I do FanStory is to discover jewels like this. Your art work was great as well.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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This is an awesome entry. I could not guess the answer, and I loved the Cleopatra story. One of the reasons that I do FanStory is to discover jewels like this. Your art work was great as well.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Appreciate your positive feedback on this piece on Cleopatra and the pearl - as they say truth can often be stranger than fiction!
Comment from RodG
This is a very good riddle that I was unable to answer. I really appreciate your notes,too, because I had never heard that story about Cleopatra.
Your phrasing is very good, especially your use of end rhyme and the personification of the pearl as "me."
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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This is a very good riddle that I was unable to answer. I really appreciate your notes,too, because I had never heard that story about Cleopatra.
Your phrasing is very good, especially your use of end rhyme and the personification of the pearl as "me."
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Appreciate your positive feedback on this piece on Cleopatra and the pearl - as they say truth can often be stranger than fiction!
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
Ah, I knew this one! Well, maybe not the price-tag, but the legend. Still, a great choice for the competition brief and a real and novel 'riddle'.
I wish you well with this and with your further writing.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Hello Anon
Ah, I knew this one! Well, maybe not the price-tag, but the legend. Still, a great choice for the competition brief and a real and novel 'riddle'.
I wish you well with this and with your further writing.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Appreciate your positive feedback on this piece on Cleopatra and the pearl - as they say truth can often be stranger than fiction!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very good image and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated, and they
are very interesting.
-Syllable count is good.
-Your poem tells the story
well and uses effective rhyme.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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-A very good image and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated, and they
are very interesting.
-Syllable count is good.
-Your poem tells the story
well and uses effective rhyme.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Appreciate your positive feedback on this piece on Cleopatra and the pearl - as they say truth can often be stranger than fiction!
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ahhhh....but once they handle her, they may want to keep her hidden....for fear that others may want the same.....
Or him. Or it.
This is an extremely intriguing entry for the contest -- certainly is a mystery object if not for the pic you've chosen! :) ;)
Great job and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Ahhhh....but once they handle her, they may want to keep her hidden....for fear that others may want the same.....
Or him. Or it.
This is an extremely intriguing entry for the contest -- certainly is a mystery object if not for the pic you've chosen! :) ;)
Great job and good luck in the contest! :) ;)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to read and review!
Comment from kathleenspalding
I love it! Excellent five - seven - five about a hidden object that I totally couldn't figure out until I read the author's comments, and then it made perfect sense! Great job!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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I love it! Excellent five - seven - five about a hidden object that I totally couldn't figure out until I read the author's comments, and then it made perfect sense! Great job!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your unsightful comments!
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LOL, you're welcome
