Silent Prayer
God's word is loud6 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is really great. Often when I pray, I go off to myself and shout. Just a private shouting match between God and I. When I do usually Gods answer come back loud and clear. I thought I was the only one who did this.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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This is really great. Often when I pray, I go off to myself and shout. Just a private shouting match between God and I. When I do usually Gods answer come back loud and clear. I thought I was the only one who did this.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much for this excellent review****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice picture for this work up for the poem I wonder though why he is praying out in the open square? I wonder if they do that in a lot of places in other countries?
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Nice picture for this work up for the poem I wonder though why he is praying out in the open square? I wonder if they do that in a lot of places in other countries?
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much and I am the same that is why this picture captured my attention****kahpot
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good contest entry, kahpot. You used the words as required in 3 lines as required, too. Your lines read smoothly with a great message. The picture is a nice pairing with your words. This is the best I've read in the contest. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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This is a good contest entry, kahpot. You used the words as required in 3 lines as required, too. Your lines read smoothly with a great message. The picture is a nice pairing with your words. This is the best I've read in the contest. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful and encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, As required, all six writing prompt words were used, and you've kept the 40-word format written in three lines. Your message is clear and thought-provoking, especially:
why does man speak in whispers, when contacting his God in prayer,
(Excellent observation of mankind.)
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Hello Kahpot, As required, all six writing prompt words were used, and you've kept the 40-word format written in three lines. Your message is clear and thought-provoking, especially:
why does man speak in whispers, when contacting his God in prayer,
(Excellent observation of mankind.)
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much for this excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Pamusart
Hi kahpot. This seems like a good entry for the contest I am not religious. Agnostic. Again meter is not a factor in this poem which is OK. it is free verse. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Hi kahpot. This seems like a good entry for the contest I am not religious. Agnostic. Again meter is not a factor in this poem which is OK. it is free verse. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much and I am still reading and learning meter, many thanks for helping****kahpot
Comment from meeshu
that is such a puzzling thought, kahpot. is it that man is unsure? or is it the quiet and private nature of faith. a great entry in the God whispers contest............meeshu
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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that is such a puzzling thought, kahpot. is it that man is unsure? or is it the quiet and private nature of faith. a great entry in the God whispers contest............meeshu
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Thank you, friend, I took from paying, which is all in silence, prayers are individual and personal, though God is for everyone and his words are loud and heard by everyone, I think I was trying to help myself understand a bit better****kahpot
