Perfect Love Casts Out All Fear
death & dying of the aged2 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
A beautifully written poem expressing one's faith. It's not a criticism but I would have left out the & sign and written the word. Other than that it flowed well and had no flaws in my eyes.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
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A beautifully written poem expressing one's faith. It's not a criticism but I would have left out the & sign and written the word. Other than that it flowed well and had no flaws in my eyes.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
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fm wright thank you for your review. giovanni
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I'm with you. My sister who always professed to be a Christain who couldn't wait to get to heaven Contracted breast cancer followed by years of wasting away from esophageal cancer. She had wasted away to 65 pounds when she died. Up to the last, she clung to the rails of her hospital bed and screamed she didn't want to go.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
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I'm with you. My sister who always professed to be a Christain who couldn't wait to get to heaven Contracted breast cancer followed by years of wasting away from esophageal cancer. She had wasted away to 65 pounds when she died. Up to the last, she clung to the rails of her hospital bed and screamed she didn't want to go.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
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Thomas Bowling my God what a powerful statement. My dad was paralyzed for 26 years almost to the day. The statement of long-suffering does apply in both cases. Thank you for your review. giovanni
