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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was awful!!! LOL! You have awarped mind, Bill! LOL. That day will come, though, hopefully not while I'm still on it. Actually, I thought it was really funny, shows that I'm not that much different from you! Lol :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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That was awful!!! LOL! You have awarped mind, Bill! LOL. That day will come, though, hopefully not while I'm still on it. Actually, I thought it was really funny, shows that I'm not that much different from you! Lol :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you, Sandra. I figured the end would be instantaneous.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Dribble Flash Fiction you have penned for the contest. You used very good words that were very interesting and full of great imagery. Very nice imagery from the art work too. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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This is a very well written Dribble Flash Fiction you have penned for the contest. You used very good words that were very interesting and full of great imagery. Very nice imagery from the art work too. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome!
Comment from frogbook
Whoops, seems he waited a little too long to decide. No more wondering. Clever idea for this word restricted contest-a vivid image portrayed.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Whoops, seems he waited a little too long to decide. No more wondering. Clever idea for this word restricted contest-a vivid image portrayed.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Bill,
nice job with this succinct little piece. Yeah, not much left at the end of the day and we'd be long gone before these events took place. lol
Word count bang on the upper end.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Hi Bill,
nice job with this succinct little piece. Yeah, not much left at the end of the day and we'd be long gone before these events took place. lol
Word count bang on the upper end.
All the best
G
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thanks, G, for the kind review.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
You put a smile on my face today with this creative dribble! I'm certain you crafted the story to go with the picture, and I'm glad you did. This is great bit for the contest, and I'm sure you'll do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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You put a smile on my face today with this creative dribble! I'm certain you crafted the story to go with the picture, and I'm glad you did. This is great bit for the contest, and I'm sure you'll do well in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Brenda.
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from BeasPeas
The ruminations of the last few seconds before he dies. What if? Caught him mid sentence--ha--a death sentence. Good dribble flash fiction. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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The ruminations of the last few seconds before he dies. What if? Caught him mid sentence--ha--a death sentence. Good dribble flash fiction. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from Ulla
Oh, dear, and he's gone, Bill. It's a great dribble flash entry to the contest. They are not easy to write at all yet you've done great with this one, I wish you good luck in the contest. Al the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Oh, dear, and he's gone, Bill. It's a great dribble flash entry to the contest. They are not easy to write at all yet you've done great with this one, I wish you good luck in the contest. Al the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from judiverse
This makes a great Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry. It has beginning, middle, and end like a story. Sunny wonders what a supernova would be like and you describe his speculation as to what the show would be like. Unfortunately, he doesn't live to get his impressions recorded. Oh, well, there wouldn't be anyone around to watch the video. Very chilling thought. judi
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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This makes a great Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry. It has beginning, middle, and end like a story. Sunny wonders what a supernova would be like and you describe his speculation as to what the show would be like. Unfortunately, he doesn't live to get his impressions recorded. Oh, well, there wouldn't be anyone around to watch the video. Very chilling thought. judi
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Yes. The point being that people look at the world?s events like a movie, never realizing the reality of finality.
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Reminded me of the Twilight Zone story about "The Boy Who Predicted Earthquakes." He couldn't himself to tell folks the end of the world was coming. judi
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That was Night Gallery, also hosted by Rod Serling, but fifteen years later.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
As usual, a wonderfully original write, Bill -- you have a real talent for those, you know? :) ;) :) Especially like the fact that the poor guy's name is actually Sunny -- lol! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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As usual, a wonderfully original write, Bill -- you have a real talent for those, you know? :) ;) :) Especially like the fact that the poor guy's name is actually Sunny -- lol! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Yvette, for the uplifting review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
As if. This is the sad state we have come down to. We view almost every event as something to record and or write our opinions about. Too bad we don't realiaze that a catastrophic event such as this will not be something for us tio record as it will mark our end as living beings.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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As if. This is the sad state we have come down to. We view almost every event as something to record and or write our opinions about. Too bad we don't realiaze that a catastrophic event such as this will not be something for us tio record as it will mark our end as living beings.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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That the point. Thanks for noting that.
