Learning a Lesson
One never knows if they are listening.20 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written short story you have penned about Clay Grant, the Principal and the Coach. I bet that was interesting for you at the time, You did a very good job with this story! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written short story you have penned about Clay Grant, the Principal and the Coach. I bet that was interesting for you at the time, You did a very good job with this story! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
Comment from Mark Valentine
Well done, my friend -- the flash fiction was impressive, but even more impressive was teaching by setting an example of taking a principled stand. Was thinking of you as I drove through Ohio last week (did a baseball trip that included stops in Detroit and Cleveland for games, and a visit to the Hall of Fame in Cooperstown).
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Well done, my friend -- the flash fiction was impressive, but even more impressive was teaching by setting an example of taking a principled stand. Was thinking of you as I drove through Ohio last week (did a baseball trip that included stops in Detroit and Cleveland for games, and a visit to the Hall of Fame in Cooperstown).
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Mark.
I have been missing you and your writing. I wish I could have driven to meet you guys..Hey, do you think we paid enough money to that pitcher(whose name is escaping me?) love those cubbies....
Comment from ciliverde
It's hard to tell a whole story in fifty words, but you did a good job of it here. That kid was able to play, even when he didn't deserve to - but he learned something from you, that much is clear. That's a winner! Good job,
Carol
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It's hard to tell a whole story in fifty words, but you did a good job of it here. That kid was able to play, even when he didn't deserve to - but he learned something from you, that much is clear. That's a winner! Good job,
Carol
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This dribble, Learning a Lesson, is an amazing example of moral courage in the face of a leadership that breaks rules to win. Your lesson, though painful (I expect) was the one remembered. We all know how character is built, though many prefer the prefab personality.
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This dribble, Learning a Lesson, is an amazing example of moral courage in the face of a leadership that breaks rules to win. Your lesson, though painful (I expect) was the one remembered. We all know how character is built, though many prefer the prefab personality.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
Comment from KL Williams
How cool is that?! It's a shame that schools put sports ahead of academics, but unfortunately it's probably true in a lot of schools. It's not fair to the teachers, and certainly not fair to the children in the long run. It's awesome that he did figure it out though. Great job, and best of luck in the contest! :)
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How cool is that?! It's a shame that schools put sports ahead of academics, but unfortunately it's probably true in a lot of schools. It's not fair to the teachers, and certainly not fair to the children in the long run. It's awesome that he did figure it out though. Great job, and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello,
This is a very nice story, but I thought the idea for flash fiction is that it shouldn't be true?
It is wonderful to hear positive feedback years later from our students. You clearly helped his young man on his way. Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
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Hello,
This is a very nice story, but I thought the idea for flash fiction is that it shouldn't be true?
It is wonderful to hear positive feedback years later from our students. You clearly helped his young man on his way. Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Excellent entry in the contest, Lo. Is this based on a true story by any chance? No matter what it is a lesson well taught and learned especially in today's society. Bravo! Good Luck in the contest. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Excellent entry in the contest, Lo. Is this based on a true story by any chance? No matter what it is a lesson well taught and learned especially in today's society. Bravo! Good Luck in the contest. Bob
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Dear Bob, 'Just wanted to send thanks again for the gift of stars and words. As in your writing, You say things in such a
caring way,
and I truly appreciate it. .Blessings, Lois
Comment from Halfree
Within the confines of the contest, well done. Outside the confines of the contest, well done.
Within the confines of my reading experience...very well done.
Enjoyed the read and that is worth six plus stars.
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Within the confines of the contest, well done. Outside the confines of the contest, well done.
Within the confines of my reading experience...very well done.
Enjoyed the read and that is worth six plus stars.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Sally Law
How do you do that? This is excellent, well done. I didn't have to re-read it ten times to figure it out. It had a moral to the story, albeit a short one. I wish I could do this. I need more words in order to communicate a thought. I admire your ability and hopefully I will get there.
Kindest regards,
Sally
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How do you do that? This is excellent, well done. I didn't have to re-read it ten times to figure it out. It had a moral to the story, albeit a short one. I wish I could do this. I need more words in order to communicate a thought. I admire your ability and hopefully I will get there.
Kindest regards,
Sally
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Dawnya
It is truly sad when sports become more important than academics in school. I taught for quite awhile and I remember getting pressure to change a grade or provide extra credit for star student athletes. I never did; I have no idea whether the athlete appreciated my stance. I've always doubted it, but maybe, just maybe, I have a Clay in my background too.
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It is truly sad when sports become more important than academics in school. I taught for quite awhile and I remember getting pressure to change a grade or provide extra credit for star student athletes. I never did; I have no idea whether the athlete appreciated my stance. I've always doubted it, but maybe, just maybe, I have a Clay in my background too.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
