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When Words Come To Life

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Easy to read and Easy to understand my poems

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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Words Written", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet, has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    thank you
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Sep-2020

    You're very welcome.
Comment from royowen
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Yes indeed, the occupation of a scribe or wordsmith's role is to make language sing to bring to life the written, which in essence what the bible was meant to do. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo as two eyes see(s)

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    thank you
reply by royowen on 16-Sep-2020
    Welcome
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start. Like you I too have a book of poems I have written through the years I
Thank you for sharing
cookie

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    thank you
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 16-Sep-2020
    Your very welcome
    Cookie
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Words Written
by donette1914

Hello, donette,

Interesting poem. I wonder why you wrote one eye sees...why not two eyes? With some poems is hard to figure out what is about..I hate that. Yours is pretty straight forward. Good job.


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
    thank you I did change that thank you
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
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I really like your poem as it made me think. And the artwork did, too. Maybe I'm just slow. LOL However, I really like both and can see now a "secret heart" as "one's eyes see the meaning of words written"- and as the words speak to our hearts, the meanings are written there, along with the words. The open book in the artwork, showing it melding with a story-book cottage is just beautiful and illustrates your poem so well.
Great job!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    thank you so very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about a secret heart when one's eyes can see the meaning of words on paper that comes alive to tell a story to entertain the reader.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    thank you kindly
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Books hold such magic and charm and we never know the journey we will be encountering when we start to read a new story, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    thank you kindly
Comment from Gloria ....
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Donette, I definitely like these forays of the imagination and you have captured the essence and importance of words freeing the imagination and opening the secrets of our minds and hearts.

A most enjoyable read today. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    thank you kindly
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    thank you kindly
reply by Raul1 on 12-Sep-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from equestrik
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This picture is so beautiful and intriquing! I love it. Your writing is beautiful as well. Sorry to be out of six stars.
:( I am definitely drawn in by this offering of yours.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    wow thank you I am so honored