Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

How beautiful and inspirational. Your verses highly spiritual filled with hope and faith. Photo seems so divine and serene. Well done. You have my thumbs up.Lolol liberty justice

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018

Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

I have read a few of these God's love contest poems now friend. The four compulsory words mixed with the 22 word allocation force the writers to be creative. I liked your approach and I'm sure many here will agree with you. Good Luck!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thank you, my Friend, in these short forms I am trying to teach myself the importance of words and their placement in a sentence, I'll get it one day, many thanks****kahpot

reply by Hitcher on 20-Aug-2018

You learn something every time you try one of these short forms friend, they are always worth the effort : ))

Comment from Cybertron1986

Exceptional

I enjoy your philosophy of life in your work. For me, this piece strikes a relative experience in me, and I sought comfort in faith..., which is exactly how you worded it. Awesome

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much, so very encouraging****kahpot

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is very true. A friend told me he was looking for a girl who would give him unconditional love, I said he was looking in the wrong place. Only God loves unconditionally.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you very much, and great advice to your friend****kahpot

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written four-line poem about God's unconditional love for man. We are intelligent beings very close to His heart but our down-fall is our own will that stand against the will of God.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you very much, most encouraging****kahpot

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Good

This speaks the truth that God loves unconditionally, man is unhappy when faith is their comfort, but the last line is not expressive 'finding freedom and happiness' as this is incomplete and inexpressive, it is rather confusing to me; I'm sorry, when man is unhappy , it is contradictory - finding freedom (again, it is dubious; finding freedom and happiness - it is contradictory and ambiguous). DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you, but the line reads "when man is unhappy faith is their comfort" and how can finding freedom (only once) and happiness be contradictive, if I have confused you, you have definitely returned the favor, many thanks****kahpot

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

I am and we should all be happy and free

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

a good entry into this prompt (which is longer and more complicated than any of the poems). it is a 'feel good" write with a good message. nice, Kahpot.............meeshu

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you very much, a very encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You met the challenge well. My only contention is that God does require faith and that seems to be a condition. Yet, compared with human conditional love, God's love does seem unconditional.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you and I agree though in these words it is his love he gives unconditionally, anyway that is what I was trying to say, I love all the help writers get on this site, very encouraging, many thanks****kahpot

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed contest entry, kahpot. You incorporated the required words into a meaningful poem with a great message. The art +n your words make a memorable read. Thank you for sharing & best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you very much, most encouraging****kahpot

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

This is so nicely done. I love the sentiment. It is very inspiring. You met the word count, lines, and included all the necessary words. Your poem flows to share the message of God's love. Well done. Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you very much, a very encouraging review****kahpot