Vegetables
Eating for a healthy life.65 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
I love your acrostic poems. They are thoughtful, informative, and fun to read. This is a clever way to write a poem for the acrostic prompt. My only suggestion would be to maybe hyphenate "well-functioning."
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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I love your acrostic poems. They are thoughtful, informative, and fun to read. This is a clever way to write a poem for the acrostic prompt. My only suggestion would be to maybe hyphenate "well-functioning."
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review. It is nice to be back.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This is like a "visit to a dietary counsellor". Educational, amicable and a delightful read. Attractive and perfectly fitting art work.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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This is like a "visit to a dietary counsellor". Educational, amicable and a delightful read. Attractive and perfectly fitting art work.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments. RJ
Comment from persevere
Your acrostic would make a good flyer to put on the fridge. I do however have one comment about a correction you need to make. ' Establish a daily regiment' needs to be ' Establish a daily regimen'.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Your acrostic would make a good flyer to put on the fridge. I do however have one comment about a correction you need to make. ' Establish a daily regiment' needs to be ' Establish a daily regimen'.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments. RJ
Comment from Ogden
That's a healthful practice, excellent advice for others to follow, and a thoughtful entry to the "Name" poetry acrostic contest.
Wishing you good luck, Rebecca,
Don
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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That's a healthful practice, excellent advice for others to follow, and a thoughtful entry to the "Name" poetry acrostic contest.
Wishing you good luck, Rebecca,
Don
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments, and contest wishes. RJ
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You are very welcome, RJ.
Don
Comment from fayesh
Your acrostic is great. It should be adopted for a poster to be in public schools. I think the writing is more prosaic than poetic, but who cares. The message is very worthwhile.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Your acrostic is great. It should be adopted for a poster to be in public schools. I think the writing is more prosaic than poetic, but who cares. The message is very worthwhile.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments. RJ
Comment from victor 66
If I could only follow the instructions in your acrostic poem, I'd be so much better off. I do try to eat more vegetables and fruits but I'm not always successful. Good luck in the contest, I think you have a solid poem.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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If I could only follow the instructions in your acrostic poem, I'd be so much better off. I do try to eat more vegetables and fruits but I'm not always successful. Good luck in the contest, I think you have a solid poem.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments, and contest wishes.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from rspoet
Veggies
This is a solid acrostic poem and entry for the contest
Vegetarians will love it, though it reads a bit like a nutrient magazine.
Good connection of lines and good advice, too.
Excellent art work to match your poem
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Veggies
This is a solid acrostic poem and entry for the contest
Vegetarians will love it, though it reads a bit like a nutrient magazine.
Good connection of lines and good advice, too.
Excellent art work to match your poem
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-You have written a good
and informative acrostic, RJ.
-Your note is also appreciated.
-Even though your poem
is informative, I like your
writing style and description.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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-Very nice artwork.
-You have written a good
and informative acrostic, RJ.
-Your note is also appreciated.
-Even though your poem
is informative, I like your
writing style and description.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
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You are welcome.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming write in its casual style and nutritional value - a startling choice of subject, but a thoroughly enjoyable read in its fun and easy flow - fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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In my opinion, a charming write in its casual style and nutritional value - a startling choice of subject, but a thoroughly enjoyable read in its fun and easy flow - fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
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You are very welcome indeed, RJ...Eve
Comment from Air Spirit
A clever and informative poem in an Acrostic form. I love veggies, so you didn't have to sell me on them! Veggies are the staples of my diet, as I only eat chicken and fish once in awhile.. Hopefully, this will motivate people to give veggies a 'fair shake' -- as they really are wonderfully delicious and so good for us!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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A clever and informative poem in an Acrostic form. I love veggies, so you didn't have to sell me on them! Veggies are the staples of my diet, as I only eat chicken and fish once in awhile.. Hopefully, this will motivate people to give veggies a 'fair shake' -- as they really are wonderfully delicious and so good for us!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
