The Idea
200 word story contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from heart of Lou
Hilarious! But I hope you did not have to go to such lengths to get your story written, or I fear you will end up in jail where you will have all the time in the world to write stories. Maybe that would be a good thing?
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Hilarious! But I hope you did not have to go to such lengths to get your story written, or I fear you will end up in jail where you will have all the time in the world to write stories. Maybe that would be a good thing?
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Heart. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from trimple
Hello, Ron
This is wicked! I Love the sense of urgency in your voice and the acrobatics in getting home and complete disregard for everything in your way, including your little girl. Just to get in and write your 200-word story!
Brilliant humour :)
I wish you well in the contest
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Hello, Ron
This is wicked! I Love the sense of urgency in your voice and the acrobatics in getting home and complete disregard for everything in your way, including your little girl. Just to get in and write your 200-word story!
Brilliant humour :)
I wish you well in the contest
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Hey, Tracey, hello. Thank you for the fantastic review. I was actually running short on time. I created this contest just before I went to bed yesterday and my job had me drive extra miles last night. I had this silly thing written but wasn't accurate on the count and it needed some fine tweaking, plus the perfect picture, of course, lol. I posted it and I've been running since then. I haven't even gotten a chance to read any of the entries yet. This should be interesting with all the restrictions I put on it. Haha. Thank you again for the great review and gracious stars for this dumb thing. I'm glad you liked it. I really got a kick out of the gymnastics he used to jump into his chair, I'm still laughing about that. Lol. Have a great weekend, T.
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LOL
Well... I hope after all those bloody restrictions, my entry will pass the Ron test!
Great idea by the way :)
tracey
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It did, with flying colors. Glad to see you jumped in.
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Phew! Thank gawd for that :)
Comment from KL Williams
This is fantastic! I didn't count the words, I'm sure you had a word count...but I love the humor! It had action, drama, a car chase, and even a baby! That's movie material right there!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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This is fantastic! I didn't count the words, I'm sure you had a word count...but I love the humor! It had action, drama, a car chase, and even a baby! That's movie material right there!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Wow, thank you for the great review and big sixer, KL W. I never figured I'd see one of those for this ridiculous piece. Not many people on here will appreciate the twisted humor I used. Like blasting his kid down for one, haha It's rare to find someone who likes my humor on this site. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating, K. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again. Have a wonderful weekend.
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I?m all about some ridiculous humor. People take life too seriously. None of us are getting out of here alive! Lol Thanks! I hope you have a great weekend as well!
