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Comment from Wendy G
It is a wise philosophy of life and living - in harmony with God, mankind and nature - and your way of expressing it stimulates the reader to think for himself, and evaluate. We are all learner-writers, and I think your style is quite unique, not to be changed. Thank you.
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It is a wise philosophy of life and living - in harmony with God, mankind and nature - and your way of expressing it stimulates the reader to think for himself, and evaluate. We are all learner-writers, and I think your style is quite unique, not to be changed. Thank you.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
Comment from JC Eno
Not bad being a 'woman' of God. Your emotion is there and it is evident and amazing. Read a little more of the Bible and you will come full circle of the true meaning of 'God'. I think you have something good brewing but more experience is necessary.
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reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Not bad being a 'woman' of God. Your emotion is there and it is evident and amazing. Read a little more of the Bible and you will come full circle of the true meaning of 'God'. I think you have something good brewing but more experience is necessary.
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Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for a professional, motivational and inspiring review. I am an incessant reader and learner. I follow your suggestion and eternal advice.
God bless you. Stay safe, Keep yourself fit. Follow WHO rules for pandemic.
Wish you every success for in your chosen goal
Alcreator Litt Dear
13/05/2021
Comment from christianpowers
I, personally, did not feel inspired, but the single sentence and use of the word 'God' requirements were adequately fulfilled, and I can see how some readers might find the message inspirational. Thanks for the message. Have a great day.
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I, personally, did not feel inspired, but the single sentence and use of the word 'God' requirements were adequately fulfilled, and I can see how some readers might find the message inspirational. Thanks for the message. Have a great day.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
Comment from lancellot
Reading this piece makes me wonder. Is liming a good simple life, without harming others enough? Perhaps if one just followed the ten commandments God would be pleased and everything else positive we did is just extra.
A thought provoking post.
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Reading this piece makes me wonder. Is liming a good simple life, without harming others enough? Perhaps if one just followed the ten commandments God would be pleased and everything else positive we did is just extra.
A thought provoking post.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Powerful statement--apt admonition. I had to read it a few times to fully appreciate the compelling message. The punctuation helps! Short and to the point.
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Powerful statement--apt admonition. I had to read it a few times to fully appreciate the compelling message. The punctuation helps! Short and to the point.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from Dr. Nad
For God Live Righteously Is a very nice piece that shares with us concerning the human race, the earth, and the Bible. This poem seeks to share the narrative of Bible story characters who were a part of the fallen race. This author would let us know that we all fit in that category and we don't have to be perfect to be in the Bible or perfect to go to heaven. We just have to follow the leader. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
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For God Live Righteously Is a very nice piece that shares with us concerning the human race, the earth, and the Bible. This poem seeks to share the narrative of Bible story characters who were a part of the fallen race. This author would let us know that we all fit in that category and we don't have to be perfect to be in the Bible or perfect to go to heaven. We just have to follow the leader. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from Boogienights
These are all good suggestions, I would also add showing kindness and charity to your fellow man. Less judgement as well concerning skin color. We have a long way to go. An excellent contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
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These are all good suggestions, I would also add showing kindness and charity to your fellow man. Less judgement as well concerning skin color. We have a long way to go. An excellent contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from DentedSyke
I think you did a fine job with this piece, given the highly restrictive format. I really don't like how you used the word "righteous," despite what you stated in the author's notes. Still, it isn't something that detracts significantly from the piece. What I really admire is how you portrayed man as he is; his motives and ambitions don't make for a better earth. Yoiu then follow this up with some examples of what we need to be and do in order to have a better earth. It's a fine piece of writing, and I commend you for it.
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I think you did a fine job with this piece, given the highly restrictive format. I really don't like how you used the word "righteous," despite what you stated in the author's notes. Still, it isn't something that detracts significantly from the piece. What I really admire is how you portrayed man as he is; his motives and ambitions don't make for a better earth. Yoiu then follow this up with some examples of what we need to be and do in order to have a better earth. It's a fine piece of writing, and I commend you for it.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from JanPerry
I feel you are being hard on the reader. I understood it without any author's notes. If others don't read it well, it's their problem not yours.
Don't waste what God has given us. I try not to eat animal meat unless Im very hungry. Otherwise we could easily live on fruit and vegetables if we try. For the other terms of advice I know I haven't worked for a long time, but I try to be positive and helpful when needed.
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I feel you are being hard on the reader. I understood it without any author's notes. If others don't read it well, it's their problem not yours.
Don't waste what God has given us. I try not to eat animal meat unless Im very hungry. Otherwise we could easily live on fruit and vegetables if we try. For the other terms of advice I know I haven't worked for a long time, but I try to be positive and helpful when needed.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from oliver818
This is very good advice we should all follow and I totally agree with you. I like the idea of doing as little harm as possible. It's essential for human survival. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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This is very good advice we should all follow and I totally agree with you. I like the idea of doing as little harm as possible. It's essential for human survival. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 08-May-2021
