God Omnipotent Deeds
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Comment from Sugarray77
I was a little confused why you chose to write this poem in an article fashion. I understand using the words, but this is poetry. I look forward to your next article/poem.
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I was a little confused why you chose to write this poem in an article fashion. I understand using the words, but this is poetry. I look forward to your next article/poem.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from Mistydawn
You're so right the world is slowly turning into a living hell. With so much corruption in the world husband's turning on their wife, families against each other it's hard to see the beauty around us, that there are good people left in the world. It's well-written, great word choice, very thought-provoking.
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You're so right the world is slowly turning into a living hell. With so much corruption in the world husband's turning on their wife, families against each other it's hard to see the beauty around us, that there are good people left in the world. It's well-written, great word choice, very thought-provoking.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from tfawcus
God, values, humanity and civilization are important words in relation to the message you are hoping to convey. Though, on the face of it, they should all be working together in the same direction, that is sadly not always the case.
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God, values, humanity and civilization are important words in relation to the message you are hoping to convey. Though, on the face of it, they should all be working together in the same direction, that is sadly not always the case.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from Cedar
I like your thoughts and ideas on how to make this a better world. However, it seems as though things are getting much worse as time goes by. Violence and corruption are taking over. Good luck...Bill
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I like your thoughts and ideas on how to make this a better world. However, it seems as though things are getting much worse as time goes by. Violence and corruption are taking over. Good luck...Bill
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from heavenempress
Waal, this is splendid work. You have an excellent writing skill. Keep it up. You gave a concrete advice to those few words. So educative. Keep it up.
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Waal, this is splendid work. You have an excellent writing skill. Keep it up. You gave a concrete advice to those few words. So educative. Keep it up.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from cajunjoe
How many entries is one person allowed into this writing prompt? I see, different word lengths. Weird. You write - "We're losing human values" and I say okay, isn't that a good thing? For what a good thing that we become less human and more God like, Christlike , more Christian rather than like humans or like the world. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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How many entries is one person allowed into this writing prompt? I see, different word lengths. Weird. You write - "We're losing human values" and I say okay, isn't that a good thing? For what a good thing that we become less human and more God like, Christlike , more Christian rather than like humans or like the world. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thanks for this comment.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, For some reason, I thought I had already reviewed this, but it's hard to tell as your writing seems to be on for weeks on end. I hope you've got great success with this short piece. Ulla:)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi there, For some reason, I thought I had already reviewed this, but it's hard to tell as your writing seems to be on for weeks on end. I hope you've got great success with this short piece. Ulla:)
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thanks for this feedback
Comment from rspoet
This is a nice statement/sentence consistent with the theme,
but it rings rather hollow, as this has been said for generations
to no avail. It is action and leadership that can bring about change
and that is sorely lacking.
What you need is specifics, not generalities,
but that's not possible due to your restricted prompt.
Best wishes to you
RS
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This is a nice statement/sentence consistent with the theme,
but it rings rather hollow, as this has been said for generations
to no avail. It is action and leadership that can bring about change
and that is sorely lacking.
What you need is specifics, not generalities,
but that's not possible due to your restricted prompt.
Best wishes to you
RS
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from heart of Lou
I think you did a great job pointing out ways we could all help make the world a better place to live in. One step at a time, one day at a time, and we will get there if we all make the effort. Great picture too.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I think you did a great job pointing out ways we could all help make the world a better place to live in. One step at a time, one day at a time, and we will get there if we all make the effort. Great picture too.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this great review I appreciate.
Comment from James Garrity
Yes, I completely agree with this, and good use of imagery! Makes you think beyond those words which is great! Cant wait to see more of this stuff! Thanks for the read!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Yes, I completely agree with this, and good use of imagery! Makes you think beyond those words which is great! Cant wait to see more of this stuff! Thanks for the read!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this praising review I appreciate.
