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Comment from Sugarray77
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I was a little confused why you chose to write this poem in an article fashion. I understand using the words, but this is poetry. I look forward to your next article/poem.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

Comment from Mistydawn
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You're so right the world is slowly turning into a living hell. With so much corruption in the world husband's turning on their wife, families against each other it's hard to see the beauty around us, that there are good people left in the world. It's well-written, great word choice, very thought-provoking.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

Comment from tfawcus
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God, values, humanity and civilization are important words in relation to the message you are hoping to convey. Though, on the face of it, they should all be working together in the same direction, that is sadly not always the case.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

Comment from Cedar
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I like your thoughts and ideas on how to make this a better world. However, it seems as though things are getting much worse as time goes by. Violence and corruption are taking over. Good luck...Bill

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

Comment from heavenempress
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Waal, this is splendid work. You have an excellent writing skill. Keep it up. You gave a concrete advice to those few words. So educative. Keep it up.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

Comment from cajunjoe
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How many entries is one person allowed into this writing prompt? I see, different word lengths. Weird. You write - "We're losing human values" and I say okay, isn't that a good thing? For what a good thing that we become less human and more God like, Christlike , more Christian rather than like humans or like the world. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
    Thanks for this comment.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi there, For some reason, I thought I had already reviewed this, but it's hard to tell as your writing seems to be on for weeks on end. I hope you've got great success with this short piece. Ulla:)

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    Thanks for this feedback
Comment from rspoet
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This is a nice statement/sentence consistent with the theme,
but it rings rather hollow, as this has been said for generations
to no avail. It is action and leadership that can bring about change
and that is sorely lacking.
What you need is specifics, not generalities,
but that's not possible due to your restricted prompt.
Best wishes to you
RS

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    Thank you for this good review.
Comment from heart of Lou
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I think you did a great job pointing out ways we could all help make the world a better place to live in. One step at a time, one day at a time, and we will get there if we all make the effort. Great picture too.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    Thank you for this great review I appreciate.
Comment from James Garrity
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Yes, I completely agree with this, and good use of imagery! Makes you think beyond those words which is great! Cant wait to see more of this stuff! Thanks for the read!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    Thank you for this praising review I appreciate.