Reviews from

In God We Trust

Live Love Be Patient Have Perseverance

86 total reviews 
Comment from RPSaxena
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Non-Fiction meeting the desired norms, having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and transparently depicting the theme within the prescribed limits.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
Superb!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2020

Comment from sherrygreywolf
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Words as true today as when you originally wrote them two years ago - possibly more so. I'm glad I read the author's notes before I started the review. I was fixing to comment that the piece needed to be divided into more manageable sentences until I saw it was a 40 word sentence contest. Interesting concept and great execution.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020

Comment from Gert sherwood
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
It' so good that you posted your All Best poem and re-posted. You had a good message in 2O18 and Good for you to
repeat the Powerful Message for the what seems to me the present year 2000, is lacking God, values, and loving your neighbor as, you love yourself.
Gert

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020

Comment from Sumpta
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

God is Love, in him alone we put our trust. We need to make the world a better place, this can be possible by doing things right and trying to spread love among one another. Well done writer.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020

Comment from Loretta Albritton Coleman
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

For such a time as this we needed this writing to show up again; true to life indeed! I agree completely with how you unpacked the forty words of wisdom. Loretta

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I agree with everything you have said here. I would just add one more thing that we need to do as a Nation: Grow Up! Everyone can't be first, everyone can't be the richest, and everyone can't be the most important. I don't know if we'll ever get over our childish behaviors and expectations.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I find very clever the way you emphasis of our sacred values: God - Humanity - Civilization. What is between the holy trinity it's the garbage that we inherit and we carry over generation after generation.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

Comment from Drew Delaney
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Well written, Alcreator! This is a really long sentence, but with commas and other punctuation, it reads pretty good. Maybe place a comma following values and patience. The commas help for pause when reading.
Drew

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

Comment from richie b
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Alcreator,
Your message in 2018 needs to be heeded as much
if not more in2020. Your writing covered all the essentials
of moral and human survival.
Meaningful living is an excellent term to make a life
honorable to God and to serve our brothers and sisters.
Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Richie b

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Every word you wrote is true, now and in 2018. You did a great job and I can see why you have All Time Best status. I didn't see any mistakes in your fourty words. Have a great day. Shirley

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020