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Endless Potential

2-4-6 Contest entry

13 total reviews 
Comment from LynnetteOK
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This is a wonderful reminder that the whole world is possible for a child. Creativity, as you said, has to be taught or at least encouraged in a child. Great job! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Lynnette. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from JDRBAR
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This is beautifully done and I love the thought behind the words. So much talent is lost by parents who either do not recognize the creativity in their children or are unable to bring that talent to fruition.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the fantastic review, JDRBAR. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from trimple
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Hello there, Ron

A nice little 2-4-6- poem that has your reader, looking back at her mothering skills and asking if I could have done more...

Very nice.

I wish you well in the booths :)


kind regards

tracey

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the excellent review, Tracey. Yeah, we all ask ourselves that. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great night.
reply by trimple on 24-Jul-2018
    You too, Ron.
Comment from jenintorre
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I really like your 2-4-2 poem and adorable poem.
'A child taught to create' what a lovely thought. I think that is what I've done with my kids. I hope so. This has my vote. Cheers Jen.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and support, Jen. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from victor 66
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Children aren't just our future, they're everything. But, just the sprinkling of news that I read about child abuse makes it hard for me to believe in god. And you're right, they have so much to offer, and some people treat them worse than they do their pets. Sorry for the rambling. This is a heart felt poem and I wish you luck.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the great review, Victor. Yeah, I definitely know what you mean there. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. Have a good one.
reply by victor 66 on 25-Jul-2018
    You are most welcome.
Comment from Michele Harber
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I love the idea behind this, encouraging creativity in children, and the fact that you were able to get it across in the somewhat limiting three-line, 2-4-6 syllable count. This is a job well done.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Michele. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
reply by Michele Harber on 24-Jul-2018
    I always find the shorter poems harder harder to review, but this one hit the mark.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This two-four-six, Endless Potential, uses these few syllables to put forth the idea that creativity is the key building block that aids all crafts, skills, goals, and the future. Nice.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the excellent review, Bill. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from William Ross
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Nice this is a great entry on the contest if we as adults can only keep that child imagination, shame most of us lose that. good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the excellent review, William. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this short piece. You have a great day as well.
Comment from mally mack
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Poems about children make my heart so full and happy. This picture is perfect for your simple words. I really enjoy the positive messages that we are able to convey through the use of childhood innocence :-)

Wonderful!

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you for the great review, Mallory. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Or, more importantly, a child ALLOWED to create?!! :) :) :) Such a beautiful and well-penned message within those requirements, and I absolutely LOVE your message! You have my vote already!

Thank you so very much for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and support, Y.M.R. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked this short piece. Have a wonderful day.